Fic: Jane's Couch (Mentalist Mini Bang 2011)

Jan 02, 2012 11:55


Jane's Couch
Author: miss_peg
Artist(s): watchyouwalk and tromana
Link to art: watchyouwalk | tromana
Word Count: 1220
Rating: PG-13
Summary: With Jane not around, who will get his couch?
Disclaimer: The Mentalist doesn't belong to me, neither does Jane's couch...
Notes: This is the first of my Mentalist Big/Mini Bang fics for the mentalist_bb challenge. Excitement!

Thanks goes to tromana, my ( Read more... )

van pelt, the mentalist, the couch, mini bang, fanfiction, jane, big bang, tromana

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tromana January 2 2012, 13:36:12 UTC
You know how much I enjoyed this anyway.

Of course the couch has feelings, Grace. What would you expect? And of course Lisbon, one of the few people Jane has allowed onto his couch, would be particularly protective of it. I love that Grace almost sees at as a sacred thing, even if in privacy she changes her mind and discovers the joys of The Couch. I also like that it has healing powers, because of course it does. *nods*

I think we all need a Jane's Couch in our lives.

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miss_peg January 2 2012, 17:05:59 UTC
Yes, yes she does have feeling. :D Hehe. The way I was seeing it also is that Lisbon would have been missing Jane some so someone else sitting on his couch would have been a reminder that actually she does miss him, lol.

It does, we all really do need a Jane's Couch in our lives. :D Thanks!

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justlook3 January 2 2012, 14:21:13 UTC
Aww, the poor couch. And poor Van Pelt.

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miss_peg January 2 2012, 17:06:34 UTC
Yeah! She's missing Jane I think, The Couch...though I'm sure Van Pelt is missing him too. :P

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hughville January 2 2012, 15:38:52 UTC
Oh, I loved this. You captured all the characters perfectly. This was just like a scene out of the show. Perfect.

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miss_peg January 2 2012, 17:07:20 UTC
Thank you! :D I've not written *too* much Mentalist fic so I always worry about not getting them right, so thanks for that, means a lot. :D

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ranger_girl0301 January 2 2012, 21:34:38 UTC
This was a wonderful story! Awwww.

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miss_peg January 2 2012, 21:43:21 UTC
Thank you!!! :) I'm not sure it's my best piece of work, but I'm glad you like it!

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sirenofodysseus January 3 2012, 16:26:26 UTC
Livejournal hates me. I posted this entire long review, and then LJ decided that it was hungry. >.< Oh well, this fic is amazing and deserves to have an extra long comment! I absolutely knew I would love this fic when I saw the title and saw that you had written it!

I think one of my favorite parts about this fic is that you wrote it without having Jane being a central part of it. You can tell that he's still there (somewhat), but he isn't what makes the entire fic go round and round. (I love Jane, don't get me wrong...but sometimes, reading a piece about different characters is what makes me happy.)

Thank you so much for sharing such an amazing piece, and of course thank you for writing it! :D

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miss_peg January 3 2012, 19:29:55 UTC
Thank you very much that's such a lovely comment. <3 I'm glad you liked it and I'm glad it came across that Jane's sort of there, in spirit, but of course he's not physically. Thanks again!

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