This was good. Poor Jim, you really feel his heart break through this whole story and the idea that his mother bailed Frank out is sour icing on a brunt cake. I'm love that Spock is so kind here. He knows that things are not going to be easy for him and Jim but he is okay with that. I fear Jim is going to take some more convincing. I can't wait to read the follow up.
Yeah, I feel really bad about doing that to him, but I really wanted Frank to end up dead and the only other way I could think to do it was to have someone kill him in prison. Since Riverside is a pretty small town, I thought that it was unlikely they would have any other prisoners in there to kill him, so I just decided to have Winona post his bail.
Omg yayyyy! You finished this story:D haha actually found this quite a while ago but then sort of forgot abt it:/ BUT I FOUND IT AGAIN and was super excited abt you finishing it!!! It's really gd:) Even if Jim's not yet 'healed', you gave him a very Jimlike determination not to let crappy things get him down haha again thanks for finishing it<3 i'm off to read the sequel now!:)
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I'm love that Spock is so kind here. He knows that things are not going to be easy for him and Jim but he is okay with that. I fear Jim is going to take some more convincing.
I can't wait to read the follow up.
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