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Fic: Til Underverse Come

Jan 24, 2011 19:16

Title: Til Underverse Come
Author: miss_m_cricket
Fandom: Star Trek Reboot/Chronicles of Riddick
Pairing: Riddick/Kirk
Challenge: 31 Days of January
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: For slvrbld747 who asked for Advisor!Kirk/Riddick ( Read more... )

challenge: 31 days of january

Comments 5

slvrbld747 January 24 2011, 09:33:34 UTC

Oh My Gosh, blithers at how excellent this is, it's just... excellent. I love how you painted all the characters. You kept Riddick's darkness, and his awareness of it while giving him a fascination with Kirk's light. The texture of the story was awesome, and Vaako's desire, and frustration for Kirk while Kirk is disturbed by him was unexpected but perfect.

Riddick's possessiveness while he watches Vaako, and his army. This is an intriguing triangle. Just lovely. Thank you. -SB

weepingnaiad January 24 2011, 18:46:16 UTC

Lovely and intriguing! I can so see Vaako as Riddick's right hand man and Kirk would be gorgeous with them.

toscas_kiss January 24 2011, 23:02:59 UTC

LOL! Oh that is good - Kirk as Bones and Vaako as Spock. Very clever.

Hiya! anonymous March 30 2011, 01:55:35 UTC

Oh my, I just love this. I wish there was more and this was a full blown multi=chapter story. I would love to see what would happen with Kirk and Riddick and I never thought I would say that, cause I never thought the two would work out. Yet, you made them work and I just love it!

healer_twilight July 12 2011, 00:39:06 UTC

Awesome, hot, totally cool... But still kinda creepy. XD