Comments | miss_emily08: not one man, no nor ten men, nor a hundred

miss_emily08

not one man, no nor ten men, nor a hundred

Oct 13, 2009 16:28

Title: It's Up To You
Author: miss_emily08
Rating: PG if that.
Summary/Notes: Well...It's pretty much how I wish 106 had ended. So spoilers for it I guess. xD It's unbeta'd so, yeah...don't be too hard, please. xD I don't even know how good it's gonna be. I just wrote it while I was in class so as to keep awake. Lol. So it might just be a load of rubbish. LOL ( Read more... )

glee, fanfic, fic, will/emma

Comments 14

abyssica October 13 2009, 23:53:59 UTC

omg that's where it should have ended!
i really wish that will and emma had a talk like this one at the end of the episode. ;)
very well done fic, though as a random note, emma's now fiancee is named ken, not ted.

miss_emily08 October 14 2009, 04:50:48 UTC

thanks for reading!

I dont even know what the hell I was thinking with Ted. Like I said in the notes, I wrote this while trying to keep myself awake in class. xD So yeah, I fixed it I think. LOL. Thanks for pointing it out. *headdesk*

kaizoku October 14 2009, 04:21:32 UTC

Nice characterization here. I liked the Kurt cameo and Emma sitting in the person-seeking-guidance chair.

Also, "not one men"-- should that be "not one man"? It would be a shame for potential readers to skip this b/c of a typo in the title!

miss_emily08 October 14 2009, 04:52:20 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the characterization. That's one of the things I'm always so worried about capturing. =)

Ah. Thanks for letting me know. I kind of rushed posting this.

wildwildwood October 14 2009, 05:56:47 UTC

That was great - and the image of Emma sitting on the other side of the desk was a really simple but striking one.

miss_emily08 October 14 2009, 14:34:27 UTC

Thanks so much. =)

tranquil_eyes October 14 2009, 09:38:23 UTC

Ooooh I loved this! I especially loved the first scene, it was very true to character for both Ken and Emma. I hope you're planning on a sequel ;) *hopeful*

miss_emily08 October 14 2009, 14:35:50 UTC

LOL. Well seeing as how I need all the help I can get to stay awake in class perhaps I will write some more. xD \o/ Thanks for reading, hun.

winehouse October 14 2009, 21:16:54 UTC

I have a love/hate relationship with this love SQUARE. Honestly, it's so overly dramatic, but still.

I love Will/Emma. But I also love Will/Terri. Can he just like, have Terri on the weekdays and Emma on the weekends? Ken can watch for all I care.

KURT CAMEO.

(<3'd this. Where's Ted?)

miss_emily08 October 14 2009, 23:20:52 UTC

It needs to go from a square to just a line or something. a line from will to emma. and thats it.

LOL that'd be awesome. except that will already sees emma every day during the week. xD but he can just add her into his weekends. so he sees her everyday.

KURT!! Of course there's a Kurt cameo. <333

STFU DERICK. ITS YOUR OWN FAULT.

winehouse October 14 2009, 23:42:59 UTC

Oh yeah! I forgot about that. But they can't do anything, silly. THEY'RE IN SCHOOL.

And I think it's pretty much obligatory to have a Kurt cameo in every work of fiction. In Glee, and anything else.

OK HOW WAS I SUPPOSED TO KNOW I WAS "THAT GUY" THAT WAS SUPPOSED TO BETA. I'M NOT PSYCHIC, WOMAN. Well, I kinda am, but still!