Fic: Speaking for the Dead (1/3)

[miss_aprosexia]

Fandom: Blood Ties
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Violence, Disturbing Subject Matter, Child Abuse
Spoilers: Deep Dark
Word Count: 2139
Summery: The second time Mike Celluci has a vision he's too drunk to notice.
AN: I originally posted this to the bloodtiesfic community, but since I'm trying to actually get this journal organized, I'm reposting it here.

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Comments

[teresab313]

Wow! I really like this! Poor Mike, now he's REALLY involved in the supernatural! I hope he swallows his pride and asks Vicki and Henry for help before he loses his mind or gets totally addicted to pain killers.

[devohoneybee]

I love this... love how it carries out Henry's fear of demonic influence when Mike wants him to help him remember the first vision -- how gifts from the dark side always carry a price. And I love how the vision comes home to roost in Mike's own pain. Looking forward to where you go with this.

[miss_aprosexia]

I'm glad you're enjoying it. Henry's attitude towards the whole demonic gift thing was part of what inspired this. I was wondering what sort of price Astaroth would exact, how he would do it, and why.

[sindee1982]

Hey there! Wow, this is REALLY good! I had almost forgotten the visions thing in DD (what with all the fan flurry and all trying to save the show), and this story has me totally engrossed. I am heading over now to finish reading the rest of it :)

[sherron0]

I haven't finished the story yet, but I had to comment on this before I forget. You wrote:
"working on a case and trying to (not think about Vicki) catch up on his backlog,"
I just absolutely love this little bit of word-smithing! Great construction.

[sherron0]

I love the whole premise of this story. They could do a spin off TV show :).
But slow down and give more detail. It feels a little too detached for me. Of course, that's just one woman's opinion.