Dark Angel fic - "Genetically Engineered Stray"

[miss_annthropic]

Continuity's a bitch.  What I really wanted to do was post the sequel to this, but it seemed kind of stupid to post the sequel on LJ when the first story wasn't up.  I can assume anyone who would meander over here has already read the first one on ff.net, right?  Right

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[fairytalescenes]

I read this today on fanfiction.net

It was very well written. I liked your take on Max's return - it was interesting.

Fic Rec: Multiple Fics, PG-13 - NC-17, Gen, Max/Alec

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[candycentric]

Loved, loved this one. I felt like this fic was completely in-chracter for both Max & Alec. Max is one tough bitch, but not without heart. And Alec is an arrogant, cocky a-hole, but not impervious to emotions and even weakness at times.

I enjoyed the bit about the nudity - how humans view themselves and how that differs to how Transgenics view nudity. I adored the fact that you got my pair into bed, naked & didn't go anywhere even remotely rokmantic with it.

Here's a couple lines I very much enjoyed also:

She wanted to hate him, but she looked at him and saw a lost brethren. She thought of him, abandoned in a world he didn’t really know, so clueless and alone he didn’t even know how to find a decent place to sleep.

That wasn’t true. She could bark an order and he’d jump. He had nothing left, but he’d jump just the same.

Great writing!

[miss_annthropic]

So glad you liked it! For all that this fic turned into a series of fics, this first one is still my favorite of them. I had this image/idea/notion of Transgenics in my head that the show never quite got right/fleshed out enough for me, so that's what prompted me to write this fic. This is how I would have seen Max and Alec out in the world together.

That and I was so annoyed that the show never wrapped up the shakes subplot, because I was intrigued with all that stuff.

[alliekiwi]

This is one of my all-time favourite Dark Angel stories. :). I can't find the rest of the series anymore, though.