My Baby (Fluff version) Parts IV-V

Jan 12, 2012 16:43


Title: My Baby (Fluff version)

Author: miss2l

Pairing(s): KyuSung

Rating: PG-15 (to be safe cuz I could just be a really perverted child)

Warning: (not so) Brief sexual mentionings and language.  Awkward themes…? Mention of non-con.  Mentions of certain sexual kinks.  Does the fact that this is a really, really long 5 part plotless piece of crap count ( Read more... )

band: super junior, genre: romance, rating: pg-15, character: yesung, genre: hurt/comfort, fic: my baby, character: kyuhyun, pairing: kyusung, genre: fluff

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yaoi_yamajima January 15 2012, 15:36:43 UTC
this is just what I need!!!!
Yesung being pampered by Kyu~~ LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE<3<3<3<3<3 so much and you don't fail BIG time~ I mean you did a very good job writing all of these 5 parts of kyuhyun pampering his baby fluff ver.

I already got a nosebleed reading the fluff ver. what's going to happen to me when I read the smut?!?!?!??!

But I'd really appreciate it if you write the smut parts (cause yeah.. I'm pervert like that) because these plot bunnies are awesome lol

well here's the real comment :
1st LOL That's one unique way to kill boredom Kyuhyun-ah~ though Yesung struggling with math is one view that I'd like to see too~ >//<
2nd OMG that bastard manager~ Awwww Kyu is sooo sweet! nobody could claim his baby but him i see *mind sharing with me Kyu?*
3rd IDK why but this is my favorite. beside the reason that it has KiSung in it, the description of Kyuhyun's activities with Yesung for the countless nights is just blow my mind XD that is soo sexy (Oh man I'm so tainted)

Well haven't read the 4th and 5th so I'll brb ^^

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miss2l January 15 2012, 15:58:35 UTC
I was getting nosebleeds writing this >.<

I actually thought it was getting wayy wayy wayyyyyy too dirty for a fluff version. hahahaha. Glad you like it though!! I wanna write the smut part (cuz there have been images like PLAGUING ME) but i'm pretty sure it'll be total fail! hahaha.

I'D LOVE TO SEE YESUNG STRUGGLING WITH MATHS!! it'd make me want to kidnap him even more >.> well that cat's out of the bag
*HE'S MINE!!* :P and Kyuhyun's i suppose... hahahhaa.
I like it cuz it has KiSung in it >.>

THANKS FOR THE COMMENT DEAR <3 <3 (kisses and cookies and cakes for you)

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yaoi_yamajima January 15 2012, 16:49:25 UTC
well It WAS getting wayy wayyy wayyyyyy too much for a fluff but who's complaining?? XDDD I'm certainly not ^^v

I believe you're not going to fail for the smut part~ cause You're already doing really FINE half way there (cause I considered this already half-smut LOL)

You know even the times where Yesung usually puffs his cheeks after drinking made me want to kidnap him and keep him forever.. hhh.. what's more...

Yesungie belongs to CLOUDS and ELFs and Kyuhyun kkkk

thanks once again for writing this yo ^^

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miss2l January 15 2012, 21:47:39 UTC
I'm glad you like my strange fluff-halfsmut awkward mix thing. Hahaha. To me
It sounded like actual crap but I'm glad you like it ^^

I don't even want to know from what depths of my mind I extracted the fourth and fifth one o.O I mean it was very... Awkward. but yesung in a dress/skirt was too fucking adorkable to resist

Actually some parts may have more than 1 smut counterparts cuz I think I want to continue where some of scenes left off but beforehand I had planned a different smut scene to the title of the part.

Glad you liked it!! <3

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karol_uchiha January 16 2012, 02:30:43 UTC
I'm commenting. That's extremely rare. 'Cause my comments are not good. lD'... BUT I HAD TO COMMENT HERE!! D ( ... )

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miss2l January 16 2012, 10:31:45 UTC
I FEEL EXTREMELY HONORED TO HAVE MY FIC COMMENTED ON MY BY YOU THEN!! I'm glad my plotless piece of crap garnered enough of your attention to comment ^.^

Oh this is crap... I dunno when I was going through it during the editing process I was like... What have I done!? Hahahaha. submissive yesung is the biggest win ever. *bricked*

I'm glad you liked my caring and awkwardly somehow ooc yet ic kyuhyun. I hope it was ic enough though >.< but I think mental images of a blushing yesung totally made up for the awkwardness right!? Hahaha ( ... )

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karol_uchiha January 16 2012, 23:22:32 UTC
I'm glad you aprecciated my comment! XD Feel relieved that it was not nonsensical XD" And you made me blush because you said it was 'totally cute' Ç//Ç'

Well I love it really !! XD And I hope you write the other version soon! I'm certain it won't be as much fail as you think! XD And yes Kyuhyun was enough ic !! I LOVE him *-*~~

I'm glad you wrote Yesung dressed like a girl 'cause it was totally worth it! *-* Awesome mental image!

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sparksfly7 January 16 2012, 03:38:38 UTC
okay, killing is not enough. I am hunting down that manager, torturing him slowly and excruciatingly, and then smashing his brains out. NOBODY. HURTS. MY. SUNGIE. (yes yes Kyu I know you think he's yours but he's mine, okay? we can share)

But the way that Kyu comforts him is so adorable. Cute H/C like this is too heart-warming. Although I hate the H part.

“I-I’m y-yours, Kyu. I’m a-all yours. E-Everything is yours. I-I d-don’t want to belong t-to anyone else…” I think my heart just melted...

and then Kyuhyun dresses Yesung up as a girl! LOOOOOOL xD

“Why do I have to wear heels?”

“Because you won’t be able to balance and you’ll have to hold my hand the entire time.” Kyuhyun said nonchalantly Oh Kyu, you really ARE evil, aren't you? <333

the being a couple out in public is adorable though ^.^ I love how Kyu basically bullies Sungie all the way through, although he calls it "pampering his baby".

ooh I hope you write the smut version xD I really enjoyed this series.

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miss2l January 16 2012, 10:38:03 UTC
I feel really really bad for the manager now... He has to prepare himself from angry fans cuz I wrote some nonsensical story >.< bricked. (sorry but kyuhyun shares sungie with me XD and I hide him in my closet in my dreams )

LOVE WRITING H/C. It's like the 90% of all my fics. Cuz the C part is all warm and melty *Melts*

We all know sungie baby loves kyu's bullying *coughpamperingcough* I mean who wouldn't want Kyu to "pamper" them right? I wanted to write yesung cross dressing and the only way I could think of was if they have to go out in public for a date :)

I hope if I actually do write the smut version it won't be as fail and perverted as it is in my head (cuz its pretty fail and perverted)

Thank you for dropping a comment!! *gives cookie and lollipop*

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lulufeca January 16 2012, 04:03:45 UTC
i didnt read Little Miss Princess, because i think Masquerade Masks was the best and i didnt want to spoil my dark mood.

i really like dark fics and some fluffy and Masquerade Masks got me. i was bitting my nails in the first part, then bitting my lips when reading about Kyu questioning Yesung and then almost crying while yesung was telling kyu about the menager aaaand aww-ing when kyu was being cute and a good boyfriend to yesung...
a question? if suju knows about kyusung... why not ask for help to protect yesung from that menager?

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miss2l January 16 2012, 10:44:14 UTC
I don't want to know how I even thought up Masquerade Masks. All I know was that I wanted parts 1,3&5 to be fluff and 2&4 to be angst and voila it was born. Somehow....

I'm sorry if I sent u on an emotional roller coaster!! >.< *bows* I didn't really know what I was doing >.> I'm glad u liked the dark creepiness of it though!!

Little Miss Princess is just some random fluff thing with random hints at smut at the end. Total fails in my opinion but some people like it ^.^ but if u don't want to ruin ur dark mood DON'T READ IT!! Its all like floating pink hearts and cake and FLUFF TO THE EXTREME.

Suju knows about Kyusung but not about the thing with the manager cuz the manager knows that he doesn't stand a chance against 15 infuriated 20+ year olds so he threatened to tell management about them and if they know management will probably break them up... Hope that doesn't make it too confusing ^.^

Thanks for the comment dear!! Hugs and kisses and puppy dogs ^.^

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2_only_jaemin January 16 2012, 16:56:33 UTC
omfg..... im soo.... idk... it was so.... wow...

i fuckin love the last one.. its.. wow....
i love their relationship! kyu is soooo manly! and yeye is just sooo cute! i love love love it.

the first one: aahh yesung and math sooo cute! and so adorable! kyu like always the evil maknae<3

the second: WTF!!?!?!?!? HOW CAN THIS BASTARD DO THAT!?!?! OMG ma poor baby! Kyus poor baby!

third: :O Kummie is cute! he accepts that kyu is fucking the person he loves :O just because yesung is happy with it :O

forth: omg omg omg omg! i have the urge to beat the shit out of this fucking maneger! even if its just the story T^T
omg his skin! ah kyu i love you so much for being sooo cute. you belong together.

sixth: i said it before... its my favourite<3 its sooo cute and i fucking love it!

i love kyusung so much and i love your storys sooo fucking much <3 and if you write a smut version i will definitly read it....

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miss2l January 17 2012, 15:39:17 UTC
Manly Kyu + baby sungie is like the sexiest/adorkablest/best thing EVERS!! Hahaha.

If sujus manager comes looking for because I made him gain anti fans IM NOT HERE!!

I had to put evil Kyu in there or there would be too much OOCness >.< but cute adorable baby sungie made up for any OOC right??

I always wanted Sungie to cross dress cuz I'm pretty sure he'd be prettier than me which is mega unfair >.>

Ill write the smut if it's not too much fail! Which I suspect it will be. Thanks for commenting dear~ lots of love for you ^.^

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2_only_jaemin January 17 2012, 22:11:11 UTC
...i know how you feel... its really hard to know that a guy is prettier than you....

YAY! IF YOU DO SO PLS TELL ME! i really want to read it... <3

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