"Burned" - A Drabble

Oct 21, 2011 19:47

Author : miss1nformation
Title : “Burned”
Characters : Jo Calderone (understood)/Lady Gaga (understood)
Rating : T/PG-13
Summary : Jo returns to the apartment he once shared with Gaga on Stanton St.
Word Count : 736
Author's Notes: just_rehearsal Prompt Challenge #1 - Bloodied (Drabble)
Warnings/Spoilers: Minor language
Acknowledgements: Thanks to my Hooker meagan4dominic for doing a quick ( Read more... )

fic: lady gaga/jo calderone

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clionona October 22 2011, 00:11:41 UTC
Gritty and angsty and so, so Jo. Brilliant use of the prompt, too. Loved it! ♥

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miss1nformation October 22 2011, 00:28:35 UTC
Thank you bb! ♥♥ *runs off to catch inflated ego*

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buttonsmagoo October 22 2011, 05:54:46 UTC
Oh, Jo you poor little lamb. Yeah, he probably did something real bad to deserve that but I can't do nothing but feel sweetness and love towards him. I think it's that bashful face he pulled at the VMA's that have since made me unable to hate him (trolololo he is real, shh!)

This was brilliant! I love the description that goes into writing a drabble and yours was no different. I wonder what happened? Obviously I know The Fame happened (and to which point, this is embarrassing I couldn't identify the song he heard, omg! It'll come to me at work later or something)

I think you should do a follow up from Gaga's perspective using the other prompt *nods madly* ;D
Love ya beeeeeee <3

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buttonsmagoo October 22 2011, 14:09:34 UTC
I like it rough.

Told you it would come to me.

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miss1nformation October 22 2011, 23:59:54 UTC
Thank you bb! And don't feel bad about not recognizing the song! :) (even though I see you remembered it later, good girl!). I shall consider doing a PoV from Gaga. In fact, you've just given me a plot bunny you wicked hooker you! ♥♥ *runs to write it down before I forget, omg!*

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meagan4dominic October 23 2011, 04:21:41 UTC
Whooooo child! Potty-mouthed and bloodied Jo, yes, me likey a lot!!!
This fic is just so amazingly written, if I were to sit here and pick out my favourite lines I would probably just copy/paste the whole fic. Your attention to detail is amazing and the angst is just beyond stunning. I adore every word, but I do especially love tears tracking purple lines down her cheeks and then the last sentence absolutely kills me.
Amazing job Hooker <3

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miss1nformation October 24 2011, 01:51:05 UTC
Thank you hooker! ♥ I enjoyed a bloodied and foul mouthed Jo too, haha!
My ego is floating away again! =D I'm glad that you enjoy my attention to detail b/c I sometimes overdo it a bit. And I loved the 'tears tracking purple lines down her cheeks' line too. (─‿‿─)

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iyeshana October 23 2011, 17:56:05 UTC
awesome ! great work, again :)

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miss1nformation October 24 2011, 01:48:42 UTC
Thanks sweetie! ♥

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