[Ficlet] Prowl

[misanagi]

Prowl

Pairing: 3x4
Rating: PG13
Warnings: Some angst
Words: 564
Notes: Written during the August writeathon for the last hour challenge to take the first line of a story and remix it by changing a word. I used thejennabides story The End of Breath. The original first line is: "Quatre's watching Trowa sleep."

Comments

[darthanne]

I like this. It's really them. Both stubborn. *hugs both of them *

[snakewhissperer]

yep, but how he ever found the strength to walk i don't know.

[misanagi]

Who? Trowa with all his drinks?

[snakewhissperer]

well yeah....
lol
with all his drinks he still walked.

[keitn]

"You were supposed to tell me to go." ♥

especially loved this. the sentiment behind it is so real.

[misanagi]

Thank you, Keithan! I'm really glad that you liked it.

[lukon_idein]

Mmmm... me like very much. :} Stubborn silly boys. And I love hard-drinking Trowa. Thank goodness he has Q to smack some sense into him.

[misanagi]

Thanks! Boys can be silly sometimes. I have a thing for drinking Trowa too so I'm happy that you liked this.

[tyreling]

;_; Although the conversation is really vague to me, I think I've an idea what exactly they're talking about. The opening is, by the way, really depressing. They're both hurting, wanting each other, but just... something got in the way. ;_; Nice job.

[misanagi]

Thank you! This turned out quite angsty but I wanted to give them a hopeful ending too. Thanks for reading!

[tyreling]

It gradually did turn hopeful in the end! :D Please keep it up!