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misanagi

[Ficlet] Stable

Feb 13, 2008 19:13

Stable

Rating: PG13
Pairing. Characters: Gen. The pilots, OC.
Warnings: Angst.
Summary: Aisha Winner sees what her brother has been hiding.

Notes: Written for gw500 for prompt #215: abduction

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fics, pilots, gw-fic, quatre, gw500

Comments 20

caerfree February 14 2008, 01:24:17 UTC

Ohh. That is rather grim... but very well done. Good job.

misanagi February 15 2008, 02:06:22 UTC

Thank you, Caer ^.^

darthanne February 14 2008, 01:39:44 UTC

I love this. Poor Quatre. I hope the people who kidnapped him died really painfully. I'm sure the other pilots made sure they did.

misanagi February 15 2008, 02:08:11 UTC

*pets Quatre* The kidnappers didn't have a happy ending. The pilots were quite mad.

just_ruth February 14 2008, 02:43:59 UTC

That was harsh and powerful. Very well written - the last line is the strongest.

misanagi February 15 2008, 02:08:57 UTC

Thank you, Ruth. I'm really happy that you liked this :)

alleyprowler February 14 2008, 03:10:22 UTC

It was the things that were left unsaid that did it for me. Very subtle, very disturbing.

misanagi February 15 2008, 02:10:17 UTC

Thanks Ally. I'm really happy that you noticed the silences. Thanks for reading.

sharona1x2 February 14 2008, 10:20:46 UTC

This is exactly why I think gen fic can be so very powerful. Great job.

misanagi February 15 2008, 02:11:05 UTC

Thanks, Sharon, *hugs*