Comments | misachan: Fic: Deliver Us From Evil (Supernatural; Dean/Castiel, PG)

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Fic: Deliver Us From Evil (Supernatural; Dean/Castiel, PG)

Jun 29, 2011 22:28

Title: Deliver Us From Evil
Author: misachan
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Dean/Castiel (although could be seen as gen/pre-slash if so desired)
Rating: PG (blood, angst)
Word Count: 761
Summary: All Dean has to do is keep him breathing.

(A/N: originally posted in comment_fic here, just tweaked a bit. Thanks to mulder200 for the prompt.)

( Dean's hands were covered in so much blood he couldn't see the wound anymore. )

dean/castiel, slash, fic, i fail at comment fic, angst

Comments 40

epicycles June 30 2011, 04:28:11 UTC

Oh, WOW. That was amazing. Short but packing one hell of a punch.

Simply fantastic!

misachan July 1 2011, 01:20:52 UTC

Thank you so, much!:)

laurie_ky June 30 2011, 04:46:46 UTC

Powerful, and the image of Dean praying a half remembered prayer and Cas breathing in time to it was vivid and sucked me in and I think by the end, I was counting my breaths, too.

Laurie

misachan July 1 2011, 01:25:56 UTC

Oh my gosh, that's lovely. Thank you so much!

wickedvirtue June 30 2011, 05:51:05 UTC

That was beautiful.

misachan July 1 2011, 01:26:30 UTC

Thank you!

strelitzia_bleu June 30 2011, 06:33:06 UTC

May I just say that I really enjoy your writing style? It's so... earnest, and visceral; you capture the thrall of certain moments so well. This was a beautiful fic; I think I was holding my breath a bit during it (ironic). Dean's veneer of forced calm was super in-character, and I think it really made the true desperation of the situation even more poignant.

Awesome. :3

misachan July 1 2011, 01:33:15 UTC

Thank you! *blushes*

mulder200 June 30 2011, 07:45:52 UTC

Poor Dean! Faithless or not, he is there when it counts.

And thank you for filling out my prompt and taking in such a unique direction.

misachan July 1 2011, 01:39:56 UTC

Aw, thank you! (I always feel bad when I get angst all over perfectly lovely prompts,:)