Comments | mirsan_fics: Prompt #69 || Catch

quirkysmuse in mirsan_fics

Prompt #69 || Catch

Nov 12, 2011 15:29

Title: Damned If You Do
Author: Paynesgrey
Rating: PG
Word Count: 244
Genre: Humor
Universe: Canon
Warnings/Spoilers: None.

Summary: Miroku just can't do anything right, even when he tries.

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#69 - catch, author: paynesgrey

Comments 6

starzki November 13 2011, 02:34:58 UTC

I really liked this story, especially the last line. It fits quite well with their characterizations and within the timeline of the story. It made me smile. :)

quirkysmuse November 13 2011, 15:33:19 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

I almost didn't add the last line but I felt it was missing at the last minute. Glad I was right!

Thanks again.

kmoaton November 13 2011, 03:21:14 UTC

Poor Miroku! At least he's persistent in his pursuit of Sango.

quirkysmuse November 13 2011, 15:33:39 UTC

Thanks for reading!

landofthekwt November 15 2011, 16:44:12 UTC

Great job of providing Miroku's POV for his behavior.

quirkysmuse November 16 2011, 01:07:25 UTC

Thanks!