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Empty Prompt - U Mad?

Sep 02, 2011 12:33

Title: U Mad?
Author: psyco_chick32
Rating: T
Genre: AU Comedic Romance
Word Count: 521 words
Universe: “Kismet”, a “Bitter”-universe offshoot
Summary: Miroku has unexpected depths! Sango seethes.

A/N: Whoops! I seem to have gotten a little plot in my story… ^_^;;

( I've never seen Miroku mad before! )

length - oneshot, author: psyco_chick32, #65 - empty

Comments 6

starzki September 2 2011, 17:07:33 UTC

Love it!

I especially love this quote: and she didn’t like the fact that she didn’t like Miroku being with other women.

:D

I also really liked the argument. It's nice to see some conflict with substance between the two. It allows for actual growth in the relationship. Very well done.

*claps*

psyco_chick32 September 3 2011, 10:12:05 UTC

I like to think that if they keep fighting, they'll just fight their way into bed?

:D It's been fun getting into this!

landofthekwt September 2 2011, 18:05:41 UTC

For a woman who does not want to get close to Miroku, she is affected by everything he does.

psyco_chick32 September 3 2011, 10:10:43 UTC

Yes. Us in the "Real World" call that denial.

Silly Sango. Resistance is futile.

quirkysmuse September 3 2011, 03:32:40 UTC

I'm very happy that you updated a chapter to this series again! I love Kim's point of view in this, and well, Miroku did have a good point in the argument, but you capture Sango's stubbornness well. Great work!

psyco_chick32 September 3 2011, 10:10:03 UTC

:D It was fun to get back into this, looking at the upcoming prompts and seeing how to work them in. I forgot how much I love writing in Kim's POV.

\o/ Glad you enjoyed!