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Smile Drabble - "Focused"

Jan 14, 2011 11:15

Title: Focused
Author: psyco_chick32
Rating: PG
Genre: Sci-Fi/Introspection
Word Count: 250 exactly
Summary: She was vicious; she was unattainable. And she was more focused than he'd ever be.

( The end is near )

author: psyco_chick32, #49 - smile, winner, length - drabble

Comments 8

paynesgrey January 14 2011, 16:17:25 UTC

Oooh, interesting! I really like the sci-fi element in this (very Firefly, haha). Nice work chica! :)

psyco_chick32 January 14 2011, 16:39:13 UTC

Thanks! I was trying to think of a Kismet segment for this, but the next bit will work a lot better for the overarching story... I've done zombies and high school AUs, so I figured space was the next great fun thing.

I'm glad it gave off the Firefly vibe!! I was hoping!

starzki January 14 2011, 18:26:46 UTC

This little fic reminded me of one my favorite songs of all time: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7R3pSryQf88

It's a very Miroku/Sango song.

Very awesome fic. I especially loved how you incorporated the prompt.

psyco_chick32 January 15 2011, 09:49:17 UTC

This was the song playing in the background as I wrote it xD

Although I enjoy that link *saves*
I'm glad you liked the fic - it was fun to do. Wish I had more words to play with, LOL

starzki January 15 2011, 16:01:17 UTC

Heh. After my meme yesterday, that song was going through my head all day.

:D

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psyco_chick32 January 15 2011, 09:48:04 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! It was fun pulling these two into the distant future :D

landofthekwt January 15 2011, 16:41:26 UTC

Never watched Firefly, but this is a great background for Sango and her motivation. Noticed that Nathan Fillion was in Firefly and now in Castle.

psyco_chick32 January 17 2011, 05:05:50 UTC

*nods* Nathan Fillion was what drew me to Castle originally - <3 he's so awesome.

It was fun to put Sango in this setting!