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miranda882

Back to School

Oct 13, 2010 10:10

Title: Back to School
Author: Miranda Aurelia
Pairing: Chloe/Oliver
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Once again their parents have disappeared in the middle of an event - and it wasn't due to League business either.

( Then what his sister had been alluding to finally registered in his mind. )

ship: chloe/oliver, !one-shot, fandom: smallville

Comments 28

newbatgirl October 13 2010, 17:30:55 UTC

OMG, this was beyond cute. I love it. Great dialogue. The kids are super adorable.

miranda882 October 13 2010, 21:34:20 UTC

Glad you liked it!! =)

I'm always worry when I write the kids that they come off as being too whiny.

newbatgirl October 13 2010, 21:51:32 UTC

Not whiny at all. They came across as very smart - and very weary of dealing with their horny parents.

slytherinpunk October 13 2010, 17:40:02 UTC

Lol! That was funny and as charming as Ollie! Thanks for this =)

miranda882 October 13 2010, 21:35:30 UTC

Haha, so glad you liked it! I've been stalking the chlollie comm for FWB updates so often these days, lol.

chloisfans October 13 2010, 18:12:42 UTC

Aaah that was cute ,left a big smile on my face.

miranda882 October 13 2010, 21:35:51 UTC

Really happy you liked it! =)

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miranda882 October 13 2010, 21:40:24 UTC

Yup, I really enjoyed your fic so I'm so glad you liked it!

I think any Chlollie kids would probably put up the obligatory why-can't-you-control-yourselves protest even though they know their parents won't change, hahaha. =)

sxymami0909 October 13 2010, 18:38:22 UTC

This story was absolutely adorable! I loved it! Frisky Oliver and Chloe are always awesome! HAHA :-) Nicely done.

miranda882 October 13 2010, 21:43:39 UTC

So glad you liked it! There's something about Chlollie that always leads my mind in that area, lol.

As I mentioned to slytherinpunk, I've been stalking the chlollie comm for FWB updates soooo often these days.