Imperium in Imperio 11

[mirage_shinkiro]

A/N:  Thank you to everyone for your reviews, and I apologize both for not getting out PMs this time and for the delay.  November has been a really rough month for me, and for a solid week, my muse totally collapsed.

FYI, there's another scene experiment in this chapter.

Chapter 11: Ab Initio
or  From the Beginning

Under the fake cut...

Comments

[mirage_shinkiro]

Thank you! :) Yeah, I'm afraid Prowl, Jazz, and Optimus have their work cut out for them on several fronts.

[wicked3659]

The scene experiment worked really well, it flowed nicely and was really easy to follow. Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, I loved the date and I felt really sorry for Jazz though, poor mech. The jealousy will be hard to manage. I hope they manage to get through what will be a very bumpy road.

I sincerely hope they don't start experimenting with their sparks D:

Excellent chapter <3

[mirage_shinkiro]

Thank you! :D I'm glad to hear that the scene experiment worked. It certainly was interesting to weave together. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the first date, although poor Jazz is definitely upset in the meantime. Ah, well. He'll get his chance.

[mirage_shinkiro]

Thank you! :) Yeah, the idea of experimenting with sparks is pretty cringe-worthy, but Shockwave and his plan is even more disturbing at the moment. ;)

[mirage_shinkiro]

Yay, you're back! :) I'm sorry work has been so overwhelming. *hugs*

Thank you! I'm so glad to hear the emotions are coming across powerfully and also that the slow revelation of Night and Mav inside of Prowl intrigues you. But, yes, Shockwave is definitely up to no good.

[blackwolf111996]

Awesome chapter!
Sorry for commenting so late. I had a busy week.

[mirage_shinkiro]

That's okay! And thank you! :D