A/N: The idea of feeding lines in the wrists is Asher119's and from "Unintended" and "Unexpected."
Thank you to everyone for the reviews! I apologize to my ffdotnet readers for not getting out the PM thank you notes. I had to make a choice: either I sent out PMs or I finished this chapter. I made a command decision and decided to get this
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Prowl and the twins require hugs, posthaste.
It's going to take something drastic like Prowl and the twins getting kidnapped for Jazz and Optimus to get their heads out of their aft. then Prowl and the twins will be awesome and bust themselves out, thus requiring our glorious leader and his third in command to grovel at Prowl's feet for forgiveness.
A girl can dream, right?
Your scene break experiment worked well in your favor. It conveyed the sense urgency/fervor of the dual conversations while at the same time highlighting how they were equally important. I thought it was a nice touch.
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Five stars from me.
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Yeah, running is a good idea. ^^;
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