Imperium in Imperio 7

Sep 13, 2010 18:11

A/N:  The idea of feeding lines in the wrists is Asher119's and from "Unintended" and "Unexpected."

Thank you to everyone for the reviews!  I apologize to my ffdotnet readers for not getting out the PM thank you notes.  I had to make a choice:  either I sent out PMs or I finished this chapter.  I made a command decision and decided to get this ( Read more... )

sunstreaker, prowl, transformers, optimus prime, imperium in imperio, jazz, fanfic, g1, sideswipe

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surrealism September 14 2010, 09:37:09 UTC
Well slag...

Prowl and the twins require hugs, posthaste.

It's going to take something drastic like Prowl and the twins getting kidnapped for Jazz and Optimus to get their heads out of their aft. then Prowl and the twins will be awesome and bust themselves out, thus requiring our glorious leader and his third in command to grovel at Prowl's feet for forgiveness.

A girl can dream, right?

Your scene break experiment worked well in your favor. It conveyed the sense urgency/fervor of the dual conversations while at the same time highlighting how they were equally important. I thought it was a nice touch.

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mirage_shinkiro September 21 2010, 03:30:57 UTC
Yeah, lots of hugs. ^^; And Prime and Jazz are due for a shock, I'd say, so go ahead and dream away. :P I'm glad to hear my scene experiment worked! Awesome! :D Thank you!

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anonymous September 16 2010, 21:35:57 UTC
Superb chapter. Oh, word to the wise to Prowl and the Twins... RUN!!!

Five stars from me.

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blackwolf111996 September 16 2010, 21:37:56 UTC
Sorry that anonymous comment was me.

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mirage_shinkiro September 21 2010, 03:28:11 UTC
Good to know it! And thank you! :D

Yeah, running is a good idea. ^^;

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