Ohayo, minnasan, I hope everyone out there in Cyberland is doing well! Thank you to everyone who commented on my "Falling Feathers" ficlet, I'm so glad you enjoyed it
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WAH!!! OMG this chapter was just so awesome! i am so heartbroken right now, but gah! this is just so beautiful! and i really loved Hannie's last line, so poignant and beautiful. everything was just . . . i can't even come up with anything coherent. Oneesama never ceases to make me speechless ♥
Imoutochan is so kind with her words! =^^= Sankyuu so much, this chapter was emotionally draining for me to write, so I'm glad it came out so effectively.
I'm looking forward to the next few chapters, including what I hope will be a very rewarding NC-17 sequence. ::Chuckles::
omg! you're breaking them!! *yell accusingly and pout*
I really didn't want to point my finger to hankyung but really, if anyone has to blame, it would be him. though he is right about not going back to tokyo because really, takki will come and find them. but giving donghae up? that would really ruin everything, wouldn't it? because donghae is hurt, having the hard time of his life and the least that he need was for his lover to give him up! that... uh, very dissapointing, hankyung...
omg, i really love this chapter. I love the conversation between han and hae. it was so intense and sad and you makes me wanna slap each one of them... grrr.... haha..
I wonder how it would be for hanhae, now that hankyung fall sick? and there's leeteuk and takki... i really need to know what will happen when they meet...
gah, this chapter drive me crazy... I dunno if i could keep sane, waiting for the next chapter!! i love you!!
Thank you so much for those kind words! Your support means everything to me.
I can't really say it's either Hae or Hankyung's fault, mostly because they both were emotionally drained and ended up saying and doing things that neither meant too. (As often happens with any couple who fights.)
However, I do promise that Takki may seem villianous for the moment, but there's far more to the man than meets the eye. He's an unsusual character in the whole storyline.
I hope the next chapter which I've been looking forward to writing is worth the wait!
Thank you so much, I'm so appreciative of the support you show my work.
I feel a bit bad that I make everyone cry with my writing, but I do agree that this was an emotionally trying chapter!
As for Takki, don't judge him too harshly yet. He seems like a terrible man, but there's far more to him than he's letting on quite yet.
Donghae relationship with Takki and his feeling toward the man will be revealed much more in the next chapter. The HanHae has been through much and they're still strongest when they're together.
I'm kinda glad that Donghae can't get pregnant...seriously, at 14? O_o;; The only other person that I knew who did it at 14 didn't really end up all that happy afterwards... >.>;; Anyway, I feel for Donghae :'( that's really sad :'( He's not supposed to be sad... :'( And it shouldn't occur to anyone in this story either :'( So, what's gonna happen now? I wanna know! and is that mystery man that Donghae met all those years ago, Rain? O_o;; 'Cause Rain's nice, but kinda...in a creepy sense oxymoron. Anyway, I cannot wait for the next chapter, so please dooooooooooooooooooo update soon :D:D:D:D
Actually, and unfortunately, 14 years old is a rather normal age for many of our young men in my state (as well as girls) to lose their virginity. And since the age of acceptance is 13(?)I believe in South Korea, I could see it happening.
As for the mystery man Hae met all those years ago? Well, that may be just one final twist in the whole storyline. =^.~=
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I'm looking forward to the next few chapters, including what I hope will be a very rewarding NC-17 sequence. ::Chuckles::
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"In a cafe?"
"The waitress wasn't too pleasant."
"You were rude, weren't you?"
"I say we shake this place down."
"I say you need to shut up and drink your coffee."
Yesung gave Eeteuk a bland look. He sipped the hot liquid, making a face.
"Seems like every time we meet in a coffee joint, the stuff sucks."
I found this part extremely hilarous XD
Poor Hae....so sad...Hannie too...
I felt like crying DXXX
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I liked that conversation too, I needed to lighten up the chapter just a little bit with some humor.
Hope the next chapter is worth the wait!
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I really didn't want to point my finger to hankyung but really, if anyone has to blame, it would be him. though he is right about not going back to tokyo because really, takki will come and find them. but giving donghae up? that would really ruin everything, wouldn't it? because donghae is hurt, having the hard time of his life and the least that he need was for his lover to give him up! that... uh, very dissapointing, hankyung...
omg, i really love this chapter. I love the conversation between han and hae. it was so intense and sad and you makes me wanna slap each one of them... grrr.... haha..
I wonder how it would be for hanhae, now that hankyung fall sick? and there's leeteuk and takki... i really need to know what will happen when they meet...
gah, this chapter drive me crazy...
I dunno if i could keep sane, waiting for the next chapter!! i love you!!
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I can't really say it's either Hae or Hankyung's fault, mostly because they both were emotionally drained and ended up saying and doing things that neither meant too. (As often happens with any couple who fights.)
However, I do promise that Takki may seem villianous for the moment, but there's far more to the man than meets the eye. He's an unsusual character in the whole storyline.
I hope the next chapter which I've been looking forward to writing is worth the wait!
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I feel a bit bad that I make everyone cry with my writing, but I do agree that this was an emotionally trying chapter!
As for Takki, don't judge him too harshly yet. He seems like a terrible man, but there's far more to him than he's letting on quite yet.
Donghae relationship with Takki and his feeling toward the man will be revealed much more in the next chapter. The HanHae has been through much and they're still strongest when they're together.
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Anyway, I feel for Donghae :'( that's really sad :'( He's not supposed to be sad... :'( And it shouldn't occur to anyone in this story either :'(
So, what's gonna happen now? I wanna know! and is that mystery man that Donghae met all those years ago, Rain? O_o;; 'Cause Rain's nice, but kinda...in a creepy sense oxymoron.
Anyway, I cannot wait for the next chapter, so please dooooooooooooooooooo update soon :D:D:D:D
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Actually, and unfortunately, 14 years old is a rather normal age for many of our young men in my state (as well as girls) to lose their virginity. And since the age of acceptance is 13(?)I believe in South Korea, I could see it happening.
As for the mystery man Hae met all those years ago? Well, that may be just one final twist in the whole storyline. =^.~=
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