FIC: "Immortal" (Chapter Thirteen)

[miracleshining]

Konbanwa, minnasan, I hope everyone out there in Cyberland is doing well! It was a BEAUTIFUL day here today. The birds were out and I was able to go for an early morning brisk walk, which I love. Work was also really good today for a change

Comments

[renichifreak]

I CHANGED MY MIND!!! MAKE ME DAE'S GF SO I CAN BEAT THE CRAP OUT OF RAIN!!!!!!!!

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Joon, ilu so effing much...you're so mature about everything, and so damn cute at the same time.../cuddles you forever

[miracleshining]

=^^= I think that all of us should become Dae!Bear's girlfriends and go on a butt kicking rampage, ne? XD

I love Joon in this too, it's been such an evolution for him in this storyline too from being very child like and innocent to becoming a secure young man. (Very much like his character Jungmin!)

I hope that my future updates will be good reads!

::huggles::

spot!

[dyealer]

is SeungHyun going to be okey??
He and JiYong just got their relationship fixed and happy together, Joon is finally a little ok but Rain just have to come and ruined everything...he is such a bastard <-- but I'm a fan of him, in real life that is, in this fic - not a chance,he juz ruin my GTop and Joonie~

Re: spot!

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, I'm so glad that you enjoyed the newest chapter! =^^=

Jiyong will soon be with Seunghyun again, he and the boyz will be on their way to the hospital before anyone knows it!

As for Rain and Joon's relationship, it's a bit more complex than it seems to everyone. =~.^=

I hope that my future updates will be good ones!

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, I'm so glad that you enjoyed the newest update! =^^=

I do promise that what is wrong with Seunghyun will be revealed in the next chapter. It's been such a great pleasure getting to develop this storyline!

As for how I'm feeling, it's still taking me some time to recover but I am on the mend. Thank you so much for asking!

I hope that my future updates will be good reads!

[xchubbycheeks]

I really want to thank you for having such good timing. One of my dumbass friends did a really shitty thing to me today. It may seem insignificant, but he took my phone and deleted all these text messages that I had saved because of the sentimental value. I was so frustrated that I cried (and I'm NOT a crier).

Anyways, on to the review! I love the interactions between Ji and the rest of BB. Seungri, Dae, and Taeyang are so funny but such true friends. (: I liked the movie scene but it was more of an intersession to me in this chapter. Again, I love Seunghyun's and Joon's relationship. STUPID RAIN. I WANTED TO PUNCH HIM. And the cliffhanger! That is just eviiiiiiil. >[ Love you! Can't wait for the next update!<3

[miracleshining]

Thank you for showing all the support you have for my work. I am very happy to know that this chapter made your day a little better. Boyz are stupid, we should be allowed to throw rocks at them. (Though seriously, that was incredibly rude, I would have hit him with the phone. =-.-=)

I really have enjoyed writing the friendship aspect of this storyline as I like to think that the BB boys have a pretty tight knit link to each other.

The movie scene was great to write and it was a good way to lead into Rain and Seunghyun's fight. (Since I obviously couldn't have Seungie kill Rain, that would have been awful!) And Rain isn't quite a villian either, he's just very confused and horrible at expressing things. (Similiar to our GTop in the beginning of this story.)

I hope that my future updates will be good reads!

[xchubbycheeks]

Yeah I so would've punched him but I feel like I would have broken down in front of him (the text messages were just the catalyst for a bunch of little things) and I didn't want to do that.

Haha yeah it definitely came out that way but when I'm in the moment...RAIN = asdklhgafhg. Haha. <3

[heatherxwho]

Rain's a huge butt. Why would you do that? Urgh.

I hope there isn't anything else aside from Seunghyun having a dislocated.

And yeah, how have you been feeling lately, dear?

[miracleshining]

Thank you so much, my dear, I'm so glad that you enjoyed the newest update! =^^=

Rain and Joon's relationship is a tricky one and he's having a hard time with Joon and Seunghyun's relationship right now. (Even though it is just friendship.) Very similiar to how Jiyong felt about the SeungJoon couple earlier in the story, ne?

As for what's up with Seunghyun, it will be revealed in the next chapter.

As for my health, I'm still not up to par but I am doing better. Thank you so much for checking on me, that means a lot to me!

I hope that my future updates are good ones!