NANOWRIMO: "Orchids" (Chapter Sixteen and Epilogue)

Nov 16, 2010 17:08

Konbanwa, minnasan, I hope everyone out there in Cyberland is doing well! It was a pretty busy day at work and I've got a few days ahead of me still. In least it's morning shifts so I can home where it's snug and warm at night ( Read more... )

cale "ghost" touluse, original fiction, orchids, nanowrimo, samuel beck

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renichifreak November 17 2010, 00:19:54 UTC
CONGRATS AT KICKING MY ASS~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

XDDDDDDDDDD

AND I LOVE THIS SO MUCH~~~~~~~~

BDK;NJV;UKSBNDGJCFVHK;

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miracleshining November 17 2010, 20:10:06 UTC
Thank you so much, Ladybird! I really owe the speed to the fact that the story was already one in my head!

But I think Sam and Cale will be glad to have a rest now! XD

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summer0smiles November 17 2010, 10:23:33 UTC
Congrats on the completion!!! Yay!~ you're really awesome! :)

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miracleshining November 17 2010, 20:10:29 UTC
Thank you so much! It was really enjoyable to get to write some original work!

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volatileflame November 17 2010, 13:03:47 UTC
so beautiful <3

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miracleshining November 17 2010, 20:10:56 UTC
Thank you, Imoutochan! I'm so happy for all the support you've shown me!

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shihan_ai November 18 2010, 13:23:44 UTC
whoa you've finished and it's only a little over halfway!!!! congrats dear, for your ninja speed and a beautiful story.

sam, cale, sadie and everyone else- the characters are all so well described and vivid; i was swept up in the journey. the tension had me on edge and flailing/gasping and the romantic moments were cute and sexy~
<3

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miracleshining November 18 2010, 20:46:59 UTC
Thank you so much, my dear friend! It was a lot of fun getting to participate after three years and it was a great journey!

The group is settling for a rest but I'm pretty sure they'll pop up here and there again for short stories and one-shots! (After all, Cale can't keep his hands off Sam! XD)

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fakemoon February 13 2011, 04:16:10 UTC
Oh, what to say about this?

It's amazing, to start off. A real piece, if I say so myself. I couldn't stop reading(though I was forced to because my boyfriend is sick and I had to deliver medicine), but with only one interruption, I think I may be in love.

Really, I do mystery horribly. My forte is action, so I love that you did this so wonderfully! I really love a good story that I can read on and on.

And you didn't drag it out or made it too short! I love that this story has a startling beginning and a complete ending. It's not something you see in good stories lately.

Overall, I'm in love with this story. It will be one of the few that I will come back to read over and over again.

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miracleshining February 13 2011, 12:42:41 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed reading "Orchids," it was also my first real attempt at diving into the actual mystery genre. (Generally when I do NaNo, I tend to either do fantasy or romance.)

It was a trick I admit to be able to write a mystery in only a bit over 50K words, but it was a good challenge!

I appreciate the support you've shown all my work and thank you for reading my original piece, that truly means so much to me!

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