runaway (1/1)

[mintyfresh1]

title: runaway (1/1)
pairing: ontae
rating: nc-17
word count: 6,000+
summary: nobody deserves to be lonely.
note: inspired by the "son of the sun" photobook. listened to this song on replay whilst writing. not spotting anybody because....i'm a lazy shit :))))

many thanks to my wonderful best friend and beta, bling_asaur bc i wouldn't be writing without her <3

Comments

[mhn77]

[mintyfresh1]

lmao pfffffffffft rude

[mhn77]

[mhn77]

BRB HAVING BEACH SEX

The Onew part..I'm still mulling over that one - but the story had a very nice flow XP

Also, will you look at the time? Only for you would I be running late for fucking Taemin, okay?!

/wondering why Haze replied me with her comment? O.o DID SHE FAIL???

[itsjustjodie]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
this was soo cuteeee :)

[mintyfresh1]

thank you, i'm glad you like it :)

[imvus]

Love the setting and of course love Ontae! And Jinki's right, no one should have to be lonely (and that includes Jinki because he seems a little lonely too)

And calling Jinki and old man....lol

and of course the smut was smut on! :)

[mintyfresh1]

thank you :)
i'm really glad that you liked it!

[g_odalisque13]

this is so great
i have never read anything quite like this and you did such a good job with it
this just proves that onew and taemin are meant to be even in an au in barcelona /nods
and i love how key goes from scolding jinki to cooing over taemin in like three seconds XD

[mintyfresh1]

:)! thank you so much :)))
yes they do hjfdss /nod in agreement
i'm glad you liked it!

[kiyabaybee]

I think you a thing with people have sex in public or along the times of that
So Jinki got his reward for doing nice things & helped Taemin :) bless these two
OnHo relationship is nice
Well done mate well done
There's probs more I've forgotten to comment on

[mintyfresh1]

lmao but public sex is so much fun....beds are for the weak!!!
thank you! i'm glad you liked it :)