fic: signal fire (kara/lee) chapter 03

[mintenergy]

Title: Signal Fire

Rating: PG/PG-13 For some strong language and adult themes.

Spoilers: All Seasons, All Episodes.

Status: Complete (Prologue+11 Chapters+ Epilogue)

Summary: Kara and Lee get one last chance to be together. Begins the moment after Daybreak II, on the hill where Kara didn’t say goodbye.

Special thanks to my sister,

Comments

[smcki10]

I dind't have time to leave a comment on the last chapter becuase i've been studying for finals. so i'll just comment on both of them here. i'm loving this story! i love how you've changed the Kara/Lee Dyanmic a little. how you've put the openness they had in season four in the season three story line i love it! i can't wait to see where it goes! your doing a awesome Job!

[mintenergy]

Yay thank you!

I went ahead and let in that season 4 openness because I felt like more often than not, it was Kara who set the tone of their relationship, so w/ her having matured through the events of season 4, I thought it might be nice to explore how that would have affected her relationship w/ Lee back then. I don't know, I'm just glad you like it.

Thanks for taking the time from busy final time to read and comment. I know how that is. Good luck with your finals!

[somewhereapart]

It may be just a lead-in, but its good. :) You have such a great grasp of the voice for the characters -- I can literally hear them saying each line.

I'm curious to see how Baltar's trial will turn out now, without Lee serving on his legal team.

[mintenergy]

It may be just a lead-in, but its good. :) You have such a great grasp of the voice for the characters -- I can literally hear them saying each line.

Always the most flattering compliment to recieve.

I know I don't always get it right, but I do this silly thing where I try to imagine the characters saying a line in my head and if it sounds ridiculous, I scrap it. I'm really, really glad you're feeling good about characterization thus far.

Baltar's trial. Hmm. You know, this version of events is tricky because we're seeing everything through Kara's eyes, so there will inevitably be some things that are not fully explained to the reader if I could not find a non-hokey way to have it explained to Kara. It's a fine line that I'm sure I failed on at some point.

In any case, thank you so much for your kind words!

[margaretmoony]

Woo! I'm excited to see another chapter.

[mintenergy]

Thank you! I'm excited to see another comment. LOL

[ecstaticdance]

I love the playful banter. Brief, but perfect. Nice chapter, ME.

[mintenergy]

Aw, thanks jen. =)

[rayruz]

I was thinking about this fic today and I'm so glad you updated. Guh... have I mentioned how my heart breaks whenever Adama and Kara are at odds... actually my heart breaks when Adama is at odds with anyone. But moving on. I can't wait for the next chapter!

[mintenergy]

Yeah, I really hate when Kara and Adama are at odds as well. I just couldn't see him believing her under the circumstances. =(

I love that you were thinking about my silly fic! LOL

[rayruz]

You're completely right that he wouldn't believe her given the circumstances. It still breaks my heart.

By the by your fic is AWESOME not silly.

[mintenergy]

By the by your fic is AWESOME not silly.

*hugs*