Of Insecurities & Inhibitions

[mint_whispers]

Title: Of Insecurities & Inhibitions
Author: mint_whispers
Beta: the flawfree ligerliger
Pairing: Yunho/Jaejoong
Genre: Romance
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Yunho is coming back from a trip with his parents, and Jaejoong is overcome by a whole new onslaught of emotions.

A/N: So I know I haven't posted in 5ever but hey, maybe this is the start of a good summer? And by good I

Comments

[humuhumu88]

ugh my heart....this was so beautiful!!

the last line.....GGGAHHHH

haha good job :)

[mint_whispers]

OMG you read this already?! I haven't even posted it on communities yet :)
Thank you sooooo much! I'm glad you approve.

[ayusfiction]

An absolutely gorgeous piece. The insecurities Jaejoong has are truly real and in fact what many people go through because we all try so hard to be the perfect person for our partner. These insecurities may sound self-deprecating and show a lack of self-worth but even the most beautiful and perfect individuals (Jaejoong himself) go through it. So I'm guessing even a perfect being like Yunho also goes through moments of self-doubt. But you know what, just a little gesture or a couple of words can keep these insecurities at bay and you managed to capture that very well in this piece. Lovely work hun! Also, the smex scene, woohoo~ insecure/trying to forget smex is right up there in my fav smex scenarios.

[mint_whispers]

I feel like if I was in a relationship that Jaejoong's worries would constantly be what was in my head, and I hope I can find someone that will make me feel worth haha

yeah smex is always gooood!
thanks for commenting! :)

[ultamatempa]

it's big step in a healthy relationship! it's happy jae's brave enough to expose himself like that. i think it's easy to fall into insecurity when you're starting to get serious. when you first start dating, you're always presenting the best version of yourself for the dates. it's after all that's gone and you start exposing the 'real' you that a relationship can grow. i think it's sad that people assume the only thing interesting about them is their looks and they neglect the other parts that are more important.

[mint_whispers]

eyyyyy I wouldn't know I've never dated *sobs*
but what you say really makes sense, and yeah it's should never be just about the looks. a good personality makes anyone beautiful

thanks for commenting!

[ultamatempa]

don't worry, there's plenty of time to get out there and start :)

[mint_whispers]

let's hope

[jaan30]

Aww, that was so sweet! Loved the last line. <3

[mint_whispers]

Awww thank you meri jaan (sorry if you didn't get that)

Thanks for commenting!

[jaan30]

LOL I might be a white girl but I also watch Bollywood :D and I've been to India. so yah, kahani ke liye dhanyavad! :)

[mint_whispers]

LOLOL better than me, I'm not indian but I'm muslim and around a lot? And bollywood is flaw free yes Kuch Kuch Hota Hai is my number one
LONG LIVE SRK AND KAJOL

[mint_whispers]

OmFg I tried okay
Thanks for commenting!