Fragile Perfection

[mint_whispers]

Name: Fragile Perfection
Author: mint-whispers
Pairing: Taoris
Length: Oneshot
Summary: Tao just wants to be perfect, but he is hurting himself, and Wufan needs to put him back together.
Warnings: character death, bulemia (not detailed).

Comments

[mint_whispers]

Spot for cerulean-dia because I owe her a glomp. <3

[cerulean_dia]

... this is not what i signed up for. hdu attempt to glomp me after this pic, hdu.

okay this is clearly one of your major angst fics, and to think that i was expecting fluff ;A; way to bulldoze my feels and scatter them in the red ocean.

he assumed it was that the beef just didn't agree with Tao's stomach. for some reason i beef made me think baekhyun and so i lol'd. and then the angst hit =_=

i love how your wufan is such a kind boyfriend, altho i wish he would've swooped in to save tao from his parents. that would be way too cliche tho lmao. and TAO OMG THAT LITTLE SWEETHEART I CANT. HE DOESNT DESERVE THIS FATE ;A;

all in all, très bien queebs (even tho you prob dont understand french according to ma mère rlab) and youd better mend my diced little heart with your ot5. j'attends!

[mint_whispers]

LOL DID YOU REALLY? Im sorry I'll warn you next time rlab.

Ya no legit boyfriend would do that. Except Yunho. We can't all be the Jung. Not even Krisus.

I UNDERSTAND THAT FRENCH OKAY IN THE CAR YOU WERE JUST LAUGHING TOO MUCH AND FEEDBACK AND PFFT.

oh sure thing~~~

[cerulean_dia]

yes please. somehow i didnt even see the character death warning and pounced right in =_=

the jung basically judges us all from his heavenly pedestal. krisus is too greasy to compare.

[evilblea]

Erg. I hate Tao's parents in this...
Can't believe Tao died... Although I did kind of see it coming...
And Kris at the end.... OMG! He's thinking about jumping isn't he...

Seriously loved this piece. Beautiful and emotionally sad at the same time...

[mint_whispers]

yeah Tao's parents need to gtfo.

LOL with me it's always coming.
Kris is considering it yes, after all, Tao always wanted to fly~~~~~~~

Thank you for reading, youre sweet <3

[envybleedsgreen]

This was really brilliant. I really liked the ending sentence.

How did Tao die though?

[mint_whispers]

With the lack of Wufan in his life, and the pressure from his parents surrounding him, Tao took out his stress on his body again, and blamed himself. And now no one was there to pick up his broken pieces.

I just added this sentence, I realized it was better not being vague lol. Thanks :)

And i don't find it that brilliant, but I'm glad you did <3

[envybleedsgreen]

Oh, gosh. ;;;;; WHY WOULD YOU. YOU COULD'VE JUST LEFT ME IN VAGUE PAIN WITH YOUR FIC, NOW I HAVE EXTREMELY SHARP AND PAINFUL HURT ALL OVER MYSELF. /CRIES.

[mint_whispers]

LOLOL you're welcome~ Anytime ;)

And don't cry, Kris may or may not have joined his TaoTao in heaven~~~~

[tragicboyp]

k seriously what's feeling anymore. The scene when Kris' standing in their school roof.. UNF.

[mint_whispers]

LOL I'm glad you liked it~
Thanks for commenting.

K, Kris is pretty much unf.

[standbymi]

why thank you for making my heart break quibz. thank you very much <3
TT TT

[mint_whispers]

no problem mimz. its the least i can do.