The Dichotomy Between Me and Me: Chapter 4

[minntaka]

Title: The Dichotomy Between Me and Me
Rating: M
Characters: Saïx, Xemnas, Marluxia, Xigbar, Axel, Larxene
Pairings: Xemnas/Saïx, Xemnas/Fem!Saïx, Marluxia/Saïx, Axel/Larxene
Summary: Saïx lives in two realities.  In one, he is an empty shell of a person - a Nobody - searching for his heart.  In another, she is a lonely housewife who, post-fugue, is

Comments

UPDATE. 8D

[devils_pet]

Oh, I love your Larxene and Axel. They seem so perfect for each other. Your Larxene is so perfect. Even if she's not outright cruel, like the real Larxene, she still has the feel about her. It's still so obvious that she's Larxene. You know I love your Axel. Whether he's an asshole Organization assassin or a kids coach. Their house is also perfect. Messy is good. XD

LUXORD. Oh, you wrote Luxord. And I love him. You're Luxord voice is so fabulous. I should stop being surprised about how well you write characters, but LUXORD. That is all I'm coherent enough to say. LUXORD. XD

Real!Saix is so fun. Him deliberately annoying Xemnas is the best though. And that Xemnas knows that and is totally okay with it. SEXUAL TENSION? 8D

Those letters, though. You can really tell the difference between each character. Fem!Saix is so human-like, while Real!Saix's...isn't. So yeah. You're killing me. Please continue to do so. XD

Re: UPDATE. 8D

[minntaka]

I had to sit and think a while about what to do with Larxene, because she's canonically really sadistic and a super bitch, which I can't really have in an integrated civilised society. I opted to make her ferocious and passionate to the point of being overbearing instead, though I'm not all too certain if it works.

Yeah, Luxord is in it! He's not too major a character though I'm afraid :( I did have fun writing him however ^_^

there's PLENTY of sexual tension between Xemnas and Saix, considering nothing actually happens between them...yet :P

Ahh, thanks!! That's precisely what I was aiming for with their letters. I wanted them to have a different tone to one another and yet, have an affinity/closeness because you know...they're the same person at the end of the day XD Thanks for reading!

Re: UPDATE. 8D

[devils_pet]

I wouldn't worry about it not working. She seems very much Larxene, and I think if she were sadistic in this sort of story, it would almost fit less. Passionate can transfer to viciousness, in instances, anyway. So yeah. Don't worry. XD

Well, whether he's a major character or not I enjoyed it. There simply isn't enough Luxord in in the world.

Evil evil woman, adding that yet on the end there. But yes. Sexual tension. For both cannon!Xemnas/Saix and for otherworld!Xemnas/Saix. Which is good. For the brain.

It certainly works. I just like how they both seem so casual about it. Fem!Saix perhaps less than real Saix, but it's still like "I'm gonna write a letter to my other self. What." It's good. Soo...Are the two Saix's ever gonna meet? 8D

Re: UPDATE. 8D

[minntaka]

Oh, that's good to hear ^_^ I don't want to overdo her (as I've never actually written Larxene before - too afraid!).

I know what you mean. Luxord fics are so so hard to find. It's a shame because in 358 Days he pretty much laments at how it sucks to be one of the least involved org members who never gets informed of stuff in the Organisation; and not only does he get ignored by game creators and Xemnas and co, he gets ignored by the fandom too! :( I like him though - he does us Brits proud :P

Ah...I can't possibly tell you if they'll meet or not :P they will so long as I actually write that part of the story - still only 2/3 through as my NaNo didn't cover it

[ketsi_aiita_n]

!!! I've been off the internet, I didn't see you'd updated OH MY GOD THERE'S MORE BONE OF CONTENTION AS WELL.

Axel is an absolute sweetheart, him and Larxene completely remind me of my boyfriend and me. I'm loving female!Saix, and I'm really excited as to how this is going to turn out.
Love it!

[minntaka]

Yeah I know, I finally updated Bone of Contention (having sat on that chapter for a good few months). Glad you liked this update! It's funny that you mention you and your boyfriend are like Larxene and Axel, as I do take inspiration from one of my mates and her bf - nothing pleases them more than to constantly make fun of one another XD and yet they're close because of it :)

Thanks for reading! ♥