The Dichotomy Between Me and Me: Chapter 2

[minntaka]

Title: The Dichotomy Between Me and Me
Rating: M
Characters: Saïx, Xemnas, Marluxia, Xigbar, Axel, Larxene
Pairings: Xemnas/Saïx, Xemnas/Fem!Saïx, Marluxia/Saïx, Axel/Larxene
Summary: Saïx lives in two realities.  In one, he is an empty shell of a person - a Nobody - searching for his heart.  In another, she is a lonely housewife who, post-fugue, is

Comments

[ketsi_aiita_n]

!!!!!! Update!

Loving it, loving the mystery, loving Larxene DOING something in a story. I adore Demyx even if he's only been in a little bit.

Uhm, gushy loveyness over now... :)

[minntaka]

:D Glad you liked! Yeah, I had a fun time writing Larxene; there isn't much of her around in the KH fandom but she's quite a character for someone with no heart, and I wanted to have a go at writing her.

And don't worry, Demyx is actually pretty crucial and his chapter is next chapter :) Thanks for reading! x

[ketsi_aiita_n]

Ffff Demyx. I always forget how much I adored him when playing KH2 (and how much my ex failed at killing him). Need moar Demyx!

Also your icon. Ngh. Love it.

[minntaka]

I pretty much failed at killing him too. So. Damn. Difficult!! I really struggled with Xaldin as well, and Luxord with his bloody card/die trick.

Haha, thanks! I did always think that No Face and Axel had a bit too much in common :P

[devils_pet]

Oh man, you're killing me. Larxene was fabulous, and I approve on so many levels. I just hope that Aqua doesn't play a horrible role, because I quite like her in the games. Axel was fun, too. We'll be seeing more of him? Also, so heartbreaking. With Saix forgetting about the carrots, and their kids being adopted. And the foreshadowing of that with the pictures and Larxene. Soooo, when's Marluxia planning on making his grand entrance?

And man!Saix telling Xemnas that he's a woman, and Xemnas being all wut? Was great. You smite me with your characterization of real!Saix and real!Xemnas. They're so perfect. By the way? You're my favorite person right now. Just sayin'. XD

[minntaka]

0_o I hope I'm not killing you too much (if that even makes sense!). Aqua doesn't play a horrible role, don't worry. Only Marluxia gets that privilege I'm not a character basher so I hope to do her awesome self justice. And yep, there will be more of Axel - he's only next door after all :D

Marluxia's not set to come until until chapter 6 at the moment, but as I'm tweaking bits of the plot, he might be in earlier :)

I did enjoy writing canon Saix and Xemnas for this chapter. It was one of those NaNo days when I wrote heaps in one day and had thousands of ideas. Then mid-fic I hit a bit of a brick wall.

You are my favourite person too! ♥ Thank you for sticking by my stories no matter how poopy and outlandish they are ^_^ *hug*

[devils_pet]

No no, you're not killing her character at all. She seemed quite sweet, I was just suspicious of her role because of Larxene's treatment of her. So don't worry about that. I didn't get the character!bashing vibe at all. Goodgood, because I'm loving Axel in this.

Ooo, I'm really looking forward to Marluxia. Is he really nasty? Because that's the best kind of Marluxia. And I can be patient! I promise. XD. No nudging from me.

Well, Xemnas and Saix's relationship in this story is so wonderful. As opposed to the sort of...I'unno, guardian?(maybe) he is in Bone, he's so much more leadery here. And annoyed, which is so amusing, because I imagine he'd get annoyed with a lot of people in his Organization. So yeah, much lots of Saix/Xemnas!Cannon love goin' on here. Not to say I'm not loving Lady!Saix and her husband. IT'S ALL FUN! 8D

*hugs* Well, I love your stories. They're fun, and you make them work. No poopy or outlandish remarks coming from me! <3

[minntaka]

I was intending for her to come out as suspicious, though whether I can work her into the fic well enough will be debatable, as she wasn't meant to get a part.

Feel free to nudge - any sort of prompt or motivation is gratefully accepted! I won't spoil Marluxia for you just yet, but I can safely say that I really really enjoyed writing him in this. His chapters were typically my favourite ones to write.

No I know what you mean. In Bone of Contention, I prefer to write Xemnas as a mentor or like you say, guardian, whereas with this one I just want to write him as a complete arse which is more likely to be in character because I highly doubt he cared about anyone in the Organisation. And glad to hear you like fem!Saix too; she's supposed to be the story's heroine XD XD

Aaaw, thank you so much dear <3 You have effectively turned me into mush with nice comments I don't deserve ♥