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Fic: Falling Star

Nov 28, 2006 18:02

Falling Star
By minnow_53

Disclaimer: These characters belong to JK Rowling and various corporations.
Pairing: R/S
Rating: PG-13
Era: MWPP, Fifth Year
Summary: Sirius can’t stop touching Remus.
Genre: Le fluff! A bit thoughtful too.
Dedication: Dear mushroom18, this is finally your birthday fic!

Now crossposted to the_kennel and remusxsirius.

( His hands sometimes seem to act of their own accord... )

happy/thoughtful, mwpp

Comments 90

kellygreen November 28 2006, 18:44:20 UTC

Ohhh, Minnow. That was delightful and sad and wonderful. That whole last bit about why Sirius ran away, and his relationship with his father and the desperation was ohhhh, so perfect. I loved it. :)

minnow_53 November 29 2006, 06:47:45 UTC

What a wonderful first comment! :) That's always the most nerve-wracking one... Thank you very, very much.

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sojisaanaru November 28 2006, 18:56:22 UTC

Oh that was perfect for right before a depressing class. Thank you so much. I'll try to remember this and maybe I can make it through class.

minnow_53 November 29 2006, 06:48:52 UTC

Thank you, very much! I hope you made it through your class okay. :)

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wildestranger November 28 2006, 18:57:49 UTC

Lovely. :)

minnow_53 November 29 2006, 06:49:25 UTC

Thank you very much! :)

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magnetic_pole November 28 2006, 18:58:47 UTC

First comment? *hopeful* Yay, more Minnow-fic! This one has an archetypal feel I can't quite put my finger on. Ah, teenage crushes. There were moments here where I felt a bit of nostalgia for my teenaged self: Sirius finds out that it’s possible to miss someone even if you still see him every day: he has no idea how he’s going to manage a whole six weeks without Remus. *sheepish smile* Yup.

I know this is slightly tangential, but I love this version of Sirius' parents--essentially unsympathetic but trying in their own way.

Enjoyed! Maggie

And on a personal note, I got caught with those exact same humiliating letters under my bed! (Sad but true.) *sigh* Why didn't anyone tell me that everyone does that, and that under the mattress is NOT a good hiding spot? Had I only known about fanfic back then...

minnow_53 November 29 2006, 06:54:01 UTC

Thank you very much for such a lovely comment! :) I'm really glad you enjoyed the fic: it was inspired by one line in The Moth Diaries, which is all about girls at boarding school, and which I don't think I fully understood...

I actually keep fanfic under my bed, but fortunately the whole place is such a tip that nobody'd ever venture there. Or so I hope!

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magnetic_pole November 29 2006, 16:08:54 UTC

Don't count on it! *smile* M.

such_heights December 3 2006, 15:16:56 UTC

*hijacks* The Moth Diaries, you say? I knew this reminded me of something, it was a bit reminiscent of that! It's been a while since I've read it, though, so which line was that?

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_emeraldgreen November 28 2006, 19:35:21 UTC

Oh, Minnow, you remind me exactly why I love R/S. This is just wonderful in every way, and what magnetic_pole said about the nostalgia is just so, so true. So much that I love, but I think that this has to be my favourite line of all:

pin him to the bed like a trophy, like a butterfly, so Remus will never elude him again

because it's just perfect. And I can't help being a little in love with Mr Black as well, and the talk on preying homosexuals, and Regulus.

♥

minnow_53 November 29 2006, 06:56:02 UTC

Thank you very much! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I had a great time with Mr Black: now we know more about him, he always seems quite sweet really! And you can't leave Regulus out, can you? :)

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