Doesn't have to be.

[miniyal]

So, I kept trying to find this to write. Not the exact scene, but something like it. Because Roa kept saying she wanted to see Peloth give Miniyal a talking to. Although it is not much of one. :) Anyway, vague attempts to try to get Miss Broken High Reaches Every Turn a wee bit better before it's too late. ;) I have to do something. *sniffles* None

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[roatelgari]

It was, I think, just the right amount of talking to. It was wat Miniyal needed. Poor broken Min. Crying is definitely better than insisting she doesn't need to.

I sort of liked these two lines:

I don’t know what I would do without you. You make me happy.

It is not as if you will ever have to find out. I will always be with you. We will never be apart.

because the way they're set up you can't tell, until you read a bit further, who said what.

I also love that Miniyal's favorite moment in flying is the bit where you think you might fall. That seems very very Miniyal.