Poor Ownah. Does she even know what she's looking for? She is like a puppy. A poor abandoned puppy what is lonely and shivery in the rain.
I like, too, the questions Derek chose to ask and the threads of information he chose to follow. I think Derek managed to get more useful information from her than J'lor did, and I like that some heads will now get busted like melons if some loud-voiced men don't back off.
I dunno, Ownah might be better off if Derek too her under his wing. Of course, then she'd have Aivey for a sister. Bwahahaha!
Consciously she is not aware, I think, of what she is looking for. Or she'd realise she has it already and would start doing something with it instead of still searching for it
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That. Was masterful. Ownah expresses her views simply and clearly, and feeds out what she thinks one little thought at a time, so her listener (reader) travels with her, and follows the logic, and never starts at her having said something outrageous, or unreasonable. Her vulnerability is there to be sensed, but it's not overplayed. So very good.
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I like, too, the questions Derek chose to ask and the threads of information he chose to follow. I think Derek managed to get more useful information from her than J'lor did, and I like that some heads will now get busted like melons if some loud-voiced men don't back off.
I dunno, Ownah might be better off if Derek too her under his wing. Of course, then she'd have Aivey for a sister. Bwahahaha!
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