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Apr 13, 2014 17:25

[Note for audio readers.]Note for audio readers. This is a conversation between two individuals; in order to be more inclusive to varied gender couples, I have not included narrative to differentiate the speakers. Instead, I've used visual formatting which places one speaker to the right of the page, and the other to the left. For listeners, please keep in mind that the Read more... )

fiction, rube goldberg, idol

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kajel April 14 2014, 02:08:30 UTC
lol I like how the physical suggestions brought the first person around to dinner and a movie! Nicely done.

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minikin April 14 2014, 02:32:12 UTC
Thank you! I did a spot of editing to it, and Ro's suggestion, but now I'm ready to link my entry. :)

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jexia April 14 2014, 05:36:12 UTC
You might want to fix "heaing" first!

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minikin April 14 2014, 06:00:09 UTC
Ouch. Good spotting. thanks.

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kagomeshuko April 14 2014, 04:52:51 UTC
Haha . . .all round about! We both mentioned Rube-Goldberg devices in our entries!

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minikin April 14 2014, 06:02:46 UTC
Great minds.. ;)

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swirlsofblue April 14 2014, 07:26:08 UTC
I like your interpretation of the prompt, sometimes the simple ideas are the best :)

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minikin April 15 2014, 02:27:44 UTC
Thank you

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minikin April 15 2014, 02:29:17 UTC
My best friend at work had never heard of him either. It's good to educate the next generation. :)

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adoptedwriter April 14 2014, 18:09:26 UTC
Enjoyed reading this. AW

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minikin April 15 2014, 02:29:50 UTC
Thank you!

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