Fic: Christmas 1980

Dec 03, 2010 21:47

Title: Christmas 1980
Author: centaury_squill
Rating: G
Characters: The Potter, Longbottom, Malfoy and Dursley families, Severus Snape, Sirius Black, Arabella Figg
Prompt: From cassie_black12: I'd love to see snapshots of the various HP families at this time of year - particularly the Potters, Longbottoms and Malfoys celebrating their baby's first Christmas in the shadow of ( Read more... )

character: alice longbottom, character: harry potter, character: lily potter, character: severus snape, character: draco malfoy, character: frank longbottom, rating: g, character: james potter, 2010, character: sirius black, -fic, character: narcissa malfoy, character: neville longbottom, character: lucius malfoy, character: arabella figg

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red_day_dawning December 3 2010, 11:04:42 UTC
Well done! You did a wonderful job with foreshadowing, a really delicate and deft touch. A poignant and sweet story.

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centaury_squill January 4 2011, 13:01:17 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad the foreshadowing wasn't too overdone.

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maevemist December 3 2010, 11:16:37 UTC
All the babies are just adorable. :) I like how you showed them being the centre of everything going on in the parents lives -- being the only ones that truly mattered and despite what some of the mum's felt about the rest of the world.

I especially loved all the magical decorations, how much fun would those be?

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centaury_squill January 4 2011, 13:02:04 UTC
I'm so glad you liked the babies. Yes, be great to have magical decorations...

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naturegirlrocks December 3 2010, 13:06:42 UTC
A wonderful little piece. It was so sad thinking of what was to come...

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centaury_squill January 4 2011, 13:02:40 UTC
Yes, indeed. Thank you!

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kantayra December 3 2010, 16:50:50 UTC
The scene with Lucius, Snape, and Draco was so...sweet, even though the undertones around it were so dark. And I loved James snarking about Dumbledore and the Dursleys'; he was a real hoot. I really liked the touches of reality in this, too; all the couples having different ideas of what the best Christmas should be. It added an 'every day' sort of perspective to what we all know will turn into tragedies. Very well done! :D

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centaury_squill January 4 2011, 13:03:19 UTC
Thanks so much. What a lovely comment!

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keppiehed December 3 2010, 16:57:53 UTC
I really enjoyed reading all about the various families; you captured the essence of the characters and their traditions really well. This poignant glimpse was a perfect portrayal. Well done!

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centaury_squill January 4 2011, 13:03:50 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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