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Sep 27, 2007 00:41

The lovely gabesaunt bested me at the stump the author meme. She gave me the prompt of water.

Thanks to belismakr for the uber speedy beta. This should be considered a sequel of sorts to Equal and Opposite.

Spoilers for 8X01/Rated: T

something Sara would do )

meme, fanfic

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boubabe14 September 27 2007, 07:27:46 UTC
Angry she had loved him. And there it was.

Awwww, this is not the way I want it to go, but dang, you make it so believable! All the emotion is there bubbling under the surface between our Geeks, and you are a master at bringing it out for us to see. Thanks for a great scene to prime the premier!

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mingsmommy September 28 2007, 22:29:56 UTC
Thanks so much; I am glad you liked it. I think these two are sould mates...it may not be smooth but they belong together.

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alicat713 September 27 2007, 11:11:23 UTC
He was kneeling, naked, in the water in front of her as he ran the spray over her hair and body, and he felt like penitent, full of sin, ready for baptism, ready to be reborn, here and now in the only fire he had ever know. Sara.

Don't go telling me *I* am a writer when you can think of/produce something this beautiful and painful and sweet all at the same time. This whole thing was just exquisite.

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inner_urge September 27 2007, 12:32:11 UTC
*sighs happy sigh* So beautiful. You keep making my mornings!

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mingsmommy September 28 2007, 22:33:19 UTC
Awww...thank you so much. I'm glad yo liked it!

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mingsmommy September 28 2007, 22:31:12 UTC
pfffftttt...compared to you, I am a hack and we both know it. You? Are amazing.

I am glad you liked the little ficlet, and you quoted my favorite line.

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jenbachand September 27 2007, 13:46:19 UTC
Le Sigh

Just beautiful lovey.

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mingsmommy September 28 2007, 22:32:33 UTC
Oh, thank you so much. I am so glad you liked it.

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doom_cherries September 27 2007, 21:04:07 UTC
Oh my God, this is beautiful. There are just no other words for it.

You have a gift, you really do.

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mingsmommy September 28 2007, 22:34:47 UTC
Thank you so much Sweetie. You are a doll. I am glad you liked it.

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jessickuh September 28 2007, 02:42:36 UTC
Poor, hurting Grissom. I thought the scene in the bath was lovely.

And now...to bite my nails all the way down to skin while waiting for 9:00 to come. It is now...7:37 *bites nails*

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mingsmommy September 28 2007, 22:35:55 UTC
It was AMAZING wasn't it? Worth the ummer of wait, right?

Thank you for reading and commenting.

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mingsmommy September 29 2007, 18:40:16 UTC
BTW, I meant the episode was amazing. That it was worth the summer of waiting.

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