Comments | mingsmommy: Criminal Minds: The Story 2/3

mingsmommy

Criminal Minds: The Story 2/3

Sep 13, 2011 12:41

Title: The Story, Chapter 2
Author: mingsmommy
Rating: FRAO/NC17
Parings: Prentiss/Rossi
Spoilers: Lauren and in to Season 7 (some spoilers, but not all because I only know the big one)
Author's Notes: A long, long, LONG time ago, smacky30 won me in a fandom charity auction. I can't remember which one...it's been so long it may have been Help Pompei or Stop ( Read more... )

criminal minds, charity, fic, smacky30

Comments 11

smacky30 September 13 2011, 19:15:59 UTC

Hotter than Satan in a fur coat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And so freaking tender in places that I wanted to cry. You got two of my favorite places in all of the Savannah area. Seriously, I couldn't ask for more (well except the end).

Love it and you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mingsmommy September 15 2011, 00:20:43 UTC

Thank you. I am glad you like it. Nowhere good enough for you though.

amichevole September 13 2011, 23:35:53 UTC

I knew my incessant bribery would pay off eventually!

Very nice stuff. Dave's reaction at finding her alive is beautiful.

Now what do I bribe you with for the next part?

mingsmommy September 15 2011, 00:22:03 UTC

Any Rossi/Prentiss would be a good bribe. But, really, I just have to sit down and write it.

Thanks for the comment.

citymusings September 14 2011, 06:06:21 UTC

This is a beautiful theory of what could be. I hope the show handles her return with as much grace as you have. Yes, it hurts badly to believe she's dead, but better to believe her dead than for her to actually be dead. I look forward to seeing how you'll wrap it all up in chapter 3.

mingsmommy September 15 2011, 00:23:18 UTC

Thank you so much for such kind words. I appreciate it more than you know. I am truly grateful for the comment.

microgirl8225 September 14 2011, 12:22:12 UTC

Again, you know I absolutely love this. Your sex scenes are always, ALWAYS smokin'. It was tender in the right spots all the while downright DAYNUM (see? You reduced my vocabulary to that).

And the scene where Emily and Dave see each other for the first time is just plain wonderful. You can really feel how overwhelmed he was at seeing her again. You are truly a talented writer. Great, great job!

mingsmommy September 15 2011, 00:28:16 UTC

Thank you so much...you know I would never have gotten through this without you.

Thank you for all you've done.

boubabe14 September 15 2011, 02:28:58 UTC

So utterly wonderful. Thank you.