Criminal Minds: The Story 1/3

[mingsmommy]

Title: The Story
Author: mingsmommy
Rating: FRAO/NC17
Parings: Prentiss/Rossi
Spoilers: Lauren and in to Season 7 (some spoilers, but not all because I only know the big one)
Author's Notes: A long, long, LONG time ago, smacky30 won me in a fandom charity auction. I can't remember which one...it's been so long it may have been Help Pompei or Stop Atlantis From

Comments

[ofsoapsuds]

I can't wait to read more. I've been anticipating this story since you posted the video with the song. This is really good.

[mingsmommy]

Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed both! I appreciate the comment very much!

[cluesby4]

Wonderful...Perfecting time, perfect storyline.

Thank you!

[mingsmommy]

You are way too kind. Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it.

[amichevole]

It seems like you're missing the next part. You know I'm gonna be nagging you until it's up, right? :P

That aside, your work is fantastic as always. I very much like the way Garcia and Rossi interact together, and the way the flashbacks tie into the main story. Looking forward to the rest.

[mingsmommy]

LOL! Well, I can be bribed into speeding up. You know the currency I prefer...

Thank you very much for the kind words. I do appreciate it.

[amichevole]

Oh, snap. Which story do you want?

[mingsmommy]

ANYTHING Prentiss/Rossi

[boubabe14]

Man, on man! I can't believe you wrote such a thing. You are a wonder. Yo know that, right? Because I'm telling you. And you know, you wrote THIS! me=happy :-)000

[mingsmommy]

I always love your comments! I am so thrilled you liked it.

Glad to make you happy.

[smacky30]

I don't know what I expected, but I'm sure this is way better than that. Beautiful work as always. Love the flashbacks and the you weave them so seamlessly into the story. And the whole cigar thing... Only thing that might be sexier than Rossi with a cigar is Prentiss with one. :)

Now - give me MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ETA: I'm not sure I like that she was in love with Doyle (even though I do get it). And what are you doing with Savannah? Hurry, woman, hurry!

[mingsmommy]

I think when they showed her offering to help him to get out of the gun-running business in the episode, they were trying to show she did care for him. Though maybe it's my own bias because I love the actor so much. I hope it didn't damage the story too much for you.

The second part is done, and Shelly has already betaed, just waiting for wojelah to work her magic on it. As for the third part? May I echo the same response I gave amichevole, I respond to positive reinforcement in the form of Prentiss/Rossi stories.

[smacky30]

Do you honestly think it is ruined? Silly goose. I just figured I owed you for threatening to rip out TUB's hair.