Criminal Minds- My Side of the Story 2

[mingsmommy]

Title: My Side of the Story 2/3
Author: mingsmommy
Rating: FRT/PG13 (will go up in later chapters)
Spoilers: Oh, let’s say everything through the current season. Except this past week’s episode. Forget you saw that.
Author's Notes: I actually started, then abandoned this story last summer. I picked it back up at the beginning of the year and finished it

Comments

[amichevole]

I was ridiculously tense, reading this, to the point where I read "Sorry I missed dinner." Her smile is weak, but she holds up her wrists. "I got tied up." and couldn't stop laughing for several seconds. A perfect Emily response to the situation, and their subsequent reunion is beautiful.

Going to re-read this several more times. Eagerly awaiting part three.

[mingsmommy]

I think she would do something to break the tension...by this time she knows she's going to be okay.

Your comments are so amazing and always make me feel better about my writing. Thank you for that.

[boubabe14]

*gulps in big breaths of air*

Whoa, that was intense! Good thing you left it with everyone OK.

[mingsmommy]

Thank you!

Yeah, I decided not to draw out the suspense for another chapter.

How are you and Tug?

[zamboni12]

Wow, lady, you never EVER cease to amaze me! This was full of suspense and excitment. So very well paced and perfectly written! Damn, that is a freaking good story.

Somehow, I had some Demonology in mind but I´ve never expected Mrs. Benton. Great surprise!

The dynamic between the team members and also between Elisabeth and Dave is delineated brilliantly.

The whole part ran down in my head like a movie which is everything I need from a good plot.
Now, I can´t wait for part three of this amazing story!

Way to go, Lisa! This piece is a treasure!

[mingsmommy]

Thank you, Heike! You are so, so sweet.

I am absolutely thrilled you enjoyed the story.

Thank you so very, very much!