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Criminal Minds Fic for The Girl Saves Boy Ficathon

Oct 06, 2010 22:52

Title: 60 Minutes
Author: mingsmommy
Summary: Rossi needs to be rescued. Help comes from an unexpected place.
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Characters/pairings: Dave/Emily, Elizabeth Prentiss
Rating: FRT/PG-13
Word count: 2599
Warnings: A little bit of violence, but nothing too graphic
Author's Notes: Many, many thanks to smacky30 for the quick beta. And the cheerleading. ( Read more... )

criminal minds, fanfic, miss cam is awesome

Comments 22

microgirl8225 October 7 2010, 03:42:55 UTC

Okay, this was freakin' fantastic! I absolutely love the concept here and you executed so, so well. I love that Elizabeth called in all sorts of favors just because Emily asked her to help. And the ending was just perfect. Of course Dave would see what Elizabeth said as a reason to have sex. It was so him. I loved, loved, loved this. Excellent!!!

mingsmommy October 7 2010, 21:36:15 UTC

YAY! Thank you! I am so glad it worked!

And, yeah, I can totally see Rossi cashing in on any opportunity to have his way with Emily.

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. You are the best.

innerslytherin October 7 2010, 03:51:52 UTC

OMG Dave's dorkiness at the end! *giggles* And Emily's response! So much fun!

The rest of the fic....wow, it's like you were at the police academy with me last weekend. In the session on "Why People Kill", they were talking about the drug cartels and how the killing is business for most of them.

I like how Emily was willing to go to her mother for Dave. It shows very effectively how important he is to her. :)

mingsmommy October 7 2010, 22:20:36 UTC

Yep...Dave, the horny dork.

I think Emily would do anything, make any compromise, for any member of her team, but especially Dave, because she luuuuuvvvvvvvvvsssssss him (please hear that with a Southern accent).

Thank you so much for the kind words. You are so wonderful! *MWAH!*

losingntrnslatn October 7 2010, 04:54:41 UTC

Thank you... A lovely way to go off to bed, smiling and shaking my head... Apple Pie, Flag Pole, making her mother happy... Yeah, that was awesome.

PS-You watch way too much 60 Minutes... Of course, it takes one to recognize this flaw.

mingsmommy October 8 2010, 00:46:40 UTC

Heh! Thank you. So pleased you liked it.

I actually am usually cooking when it's on, but Keith watches every week.

daylyn October 7 2010, 06:17:39 UTC

This is brilliant. The tone of the report was spot-on, but the end... OMG, the end... that was just made of win! Awesome and well done and just brilliant. Loved this.

mingsmommy October 8 2010, 00:48:24 UTC

Thank you SO much. I am thrilled you liked it and am really delighted you liked the end.

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. It means a lot to me.

alicat713 October 7 2010, 12:12:37 UTC

First of all, this was AMAZINGLY brilliant. I loved every moment of it, but I do want to comment on a couple of things that were beyond awesome ( ... )

mingsmommy October 8 2010, 01:03:22 UTC

Oh, thank you so much!

Ali, you are so sweet, but truly I am seriously grateful that you think the premise worked. I was a little bit anxious it was going to be boring...that it wasn't going to work the way I wanted it to. So yay! Thanks so much!

If it worked for you the way you described, it worked the way I wanted it to. THANK YOU!