Connections - chapter 22

Apr 06, 2016 11:42

Title: Connections
Pairings: Yoomin, Yunjae, Jaejoong/OC, Junsu/OC
Warnings: Jaejoong and Junsu het, mpreg
Rating: Rated
Genre: Fantasy + Sci-fi
Summary: Somewhere in a possible distant future, there are colonies on distant planets. One of these planets has dragons and more amazingly, even men can birth children due to ancient genetic manipulation ( Read more... )

fic: connections, yoomin, sci-fi fantasy, het, yunjae

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demonshide7 April 6 2016, 11:07:32 UTC

Yesh!!!! Oooohhhh!  By Lhara, you've almost done it!!!! Waiting for hot smexy scenes and more of Jaejoong and Yunho's love. But definitely to Jae's awakening of all he had lost.

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minesomine April 6 2016, 15:22:52 UTC
Thank you! I'll try to deliver some sexiness one of these days. Yunjae is almost there. Almost!

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roughmetal2 April 6 2016, 13:21:49 UTC
I'm so happy to see the double update. There's been a dearth of yoomin fics so this is very much welcome. I like the developments so far especially with yunjae. At least both of them are experiencing happiness. And jae's connection with his unborn child also makes me wanna cry. I'm just so overwhelmed with emotion. Btw, i can't wait to find out what is yoochun's surprise to changmin.

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minesomine April 6 2016, 15:27:31 UTC
Thanks. :D
I wrote yesterday and this morning again. It also helped that I already had the Yunjae part mostly written. Since 2014, damn! This fic is now 2/3 done, I think. Maybe even 3/4 if I speed things along.

I will pay some attention to fix Yunjae in the remaining chapters but Yoomin is never far behind with their fire. Yes, not enough Yoomin fics out there. I want more!

No crying! I know it's an emotional scene but no crying unless it's happy tears.

Oh, Yoochun has one nice surprise for Changmin. Something that should have been obvious after studying all that porn... ;)

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emy_567 April 6 2016, 15:52:59 UTC

YESSS!! Finally Finally Finally... Jaejoongie you sure took some time to get to where you are lol but that's ok because there's a little baby yunjae on the way!!
I'm so excited for more of this story you have no idea, i think i might actually cry happy tears lol previous to this chapter i literally way like it's ok yunjae will he fixed.. they will be fixed and realize they are meant for each other they'll get their connection back and it'll be stronger and amazing and they'll have a billion pretty babies including the ones with Lydia and now finally it's happening or beginning!!!
Thank you for this amazing story it's been a while since I've been this excited over a story, i hope you're enjoying coming up with the rest of the story and writing it as much as I'm enjoying reading it, which let me tell you is A LLLLLOOOOOT... lol
Ok I'm going to stop typing now lol Thank you again!!! You definitely made my day with this double update :D

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minesomine April 7 2016, 07:14:54 UTC
Yep, a lot of time has passed already. But Jae is finally on the right track.
LOL, you made me laugh with your excitement. It's very good getting such a comment. Thank you!

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sheilapiglet April 6 2016, 20:59:53 UTC
Thanks for the double update! So glad to see Yunjae's progress as well as the new addition to their family! At least they have an indirect connection now =)

Just wanted to point out that you wrote the part about Jae realizing he was pregnant twice.....once at the end of ch.21 and then int he middle of ch.22...haha.

I wonder if YC is thinking of suggesting to CM that he carry their baby? I wonder if that's possible?

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minesomine April 7 2016, 07:19:17 UTC
The indirect connection is going to be a nice way for Jae to realize just how much Yunho loves him.

That wasn't a glitch. I included the hint of the revelation in ch21 but then after posting I wasn't satisfied with it. I wanted to include what everyone else was doing, so I sort of started ch22 the day before and led up to the revelation again. That way I could give glimpses of the different characters before focusing again on Yunjae.
That's the problem with posting as soon as I have something written. I'm too lazy to go back and edit it.
Hope it's not too confusing. Added an explanation line on the beginning of ch22 to help.

Nah, nothing like that. The Connection won't allow it. Changmin has turned blue in the face trying to switch their roles but their body chemistry won't hear it.

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sheilapiglet April 7 2016, 07:27:54 UTC
Ah I see, ya, the little explanation at the beginning of ch.22 helped. Thanks ^^

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minesomine April 7 2016, 07:41:52 UTC
Thanks for pointing it out to me. I would have been too lazy to fix it if you hadn't "kicked" my butt.

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kattan69 April 7 2016, 00:39:33 UTC
Now that was a surprise for Jae being pregnant but it is good news....as it will forged a stronger bond with Yunho now.

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minesomine April 7 2016, 07:19:53 UTC
They already repaired their friendship bond, now to work on that Linked Pair bond!

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