Author: Minesomine with Ichigotabetai's contribution
Pairing: main Yunjae and Yoosu, other pairings
Rating: Rated for themes, violence and language
Warnings: Trigger for jealousy,infidelity, betrayal, verbal abuse and attempted rape
Summary: They were the perfect couple. Or were they?
Part 1/2,
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Run! )
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Yes, Jae is strong enough to pick up and carry on.
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Thank you for returning to writing. You did a great job of editing, I can't tell which bits are yours and which are the Ichi's.
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I hope my warnings are explicit enough. I know this is not your cup of tea. Thank you for still reading it anyway.
I pulled some bits from personal experience, friend's experience and extrapollated with a very generous dose of my imagination. And then set the tone by what Ichi had written for me. I'm pretty sure had she written the full story it would have gone even darker.
I can tell in secret what she did wrote. You really can't tell? Neither did she when I showed her what I had already done. But I rule that under temporary amnesia.
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I think your warnings are fine. Maybe put one in for verbal abuse too?
Oh baby. I'm sorry to hear any of this is from your own experience.
((Huggles you))
I guess I could try to pull out the bits that sound like her, with a magnifying glass if I wanted to.
But it flows together well. I thought some of the belittling and swearing was yours, you always get that sexually jealous male voice right.
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damn i thought i will never get more angry after that good for nothing bastard jung fucked min behind jae"s back. but that backstabber chun prove me otherwise
omg jae T_T my poor baby jae. you're so strong, you can survive baby. find another person that will love you unconditionally. you deserve that T_T
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Yunho is not a bastard that gets to apologize here. Jae won't ever let him apologize.
And Yoochun is even worse. He can get us even more angry than Yunho and that is saying something.
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Going to read something happy now.
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Yeahhh, lots of dark stuff is usually written as smth that happened before.
No worry. I'm a sucker for happy endings. I have/will have other happy Yunjae stories.
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