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minesomine

Where were you all my life? 64/65

Nov 18, 2014 15:25

Chapter 64 - Happy...

Pairings: Yunjae, little hints of Yoosu and Changmin / Lee Jun Ki
Warnings: mention rape and abuse, some violence, smut.
Summary:
Kim Jaejoong is forced to do business with the mafia who keep threatening him. Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun are responsible for his security. Jung Yunho is a cop investigating a paedophile/mafia man ( Read more... )

violence, yoosu, minjunki, yunjae, smut, fic: where were you, action

Comments 10

Wife and Mistress spot! minesomine November 18 2014, 18:07:31 UTC

RE: Wife and Mistress spot! chihana11 November 19 2014, 02:58:29 UTC

Kissing! Finally they are kissing! YES!

And it's so yummy and romantic!

They are boyfriends now, but to me they have been boyfriends for so very long, and Yunho wants to adopt a baby with Jae and Changmin hired girls!

Top is such a sexy namja isn't he? Hmmm, I would dye my hair any color for him.

RE: Wife and Mistress spot! minesomine November 19 2014, 15:24:41 UTC

That was one kiss that sure took it's time, lol.
I started to get insecure about the damn kiss after everyone started to pick up that they hadn't kissed yet. It wasn't even a concious decision, it's just that at some point I realised that I hadn't made them kiss yet and decided to run with it. It ended up fitting quite well in the story. :)

I'm happy you enjoyed the kiss scene. I tried to focus more on feelings than the kiss itself.
Yes, they have been a couple for ages. :) The only ones not aware of that were our two idiots.

Yep, I thought it would be cute for Yunho to start thinking about long term more or less at the same times Jaejoong already wants them to move in together. Both in the same wave length.
Women exist in this universe. Chullie has a bit of an allergy to them. Girls among the bodyguards, oh, that should prove interesting.

Top, so dangerous and so helpless with kids. :)
I think I want a piece of him too. And that eyebrow. ;)

suju_therapy November 18 2014, 21:45:11 UTC

Wait. No. Two Chapters. Now. Wait. No. It's too late. Nonono. I have work tomorrow nooooooo...*existential crisis*
...
Fuck it. Who needs sleep anyway.

*reads*

Any further comments will have to wait tomorrow, though oO

minesomine November 18 2014, 23:17:40 UTC

I need to go sleep as well but another author has updated and I think I'll read before going to sleep.
We are both crazy. :D

suju_therapy November 19 2014, 19:22:18 UTC

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minesomine November 20 2014, 17:36:22 UTC

LOL!

kazemomo November 27 2014, 05:58:26 UTC

The kiss! The damn kiss! Yes!! *celebration*

Everyone's moving forward. ^v^

minesomine November 27 2014, 15:17:09 UTC

That was one sweet kiss. :)

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minesomine October 6 2015, 06:46:49 UTC

Hi. Sorry for the late replay.

I do have plans for some shorts based on this story. And... one does involve that baby. ;)
I just can not promise when.
This being a new mom combined with my natural laziness has me not writing for some time. But I miss writing. Let's keep our fingers cross that I can write something soon.

And thank you again for reading and enjoying my story. It means a lot to me.