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minesomine

Where were you all my life? 57/?

Sep 18, 2014 15:53

Chapter 57 - Bureaucracy And Just Time

Pairings: Yunjae, little hints of Yoosu and Changmin / Lee Jun Ki
Warnings: mention rape and abuse, some violence, smut.
Summary:
Kim Jaejoong is forced to do business with the mafia who keep threatening him. Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun are responsible for his security. Jung Yunho is a cop investigating a ( Read more... )

yoosu, minjunki, smut, violence, spazz, yunjae, action, fic: where were you

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chihana11 September 18 2014, 20:09:14 UTC

Love the chapter. Be back with more later.

minesomine September 18 2014, 21:41:33 UTC

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chihana11 September 19 2014, 03:17:29 UTC

Think I said before how well this is wrapping itself up? Well it is, Everyone seems to be doing so well, healing and moving on. Of course this means that you are gonna spring a surprise on us doesn't it? I wonder what will happen when Yunho and Jae run across each other?

minesomine September 19 2014, 10:09:58 UTC

Oh, no big surprises like that. Except for getting Siwon out of the way in an interesting fashion, the rest will be like this turned into a fluffy romance comedy or something.

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xzeffirx September 18 2014, 20:30:54 UTC

so glad that the boys (older generation included) are so reasonable and realised they need help do deal with all the things.

ROLF at Tae's "Please, no dancing"

Cheers for TOP, for being so efficient in dealing with those scams! And LOL at him not having even a traffic ticket. But may be police is doing their job, but not much, as everyone surely wanted to kill those bastards who hurt children themselves! (but unfortunately, can't)

As for ideas.. I am sure you have plenty of your own, but just few thoughts that ran in my mind while reading:
1) I kind of feel that Geun Suk got too much score-free? he was really unfairly picky on Yunho.. May be some flash back of him having a good scare or smth else. Kind of hard to beleive he changed much just by getting to date
2) how Captain dealed with the girl who was leaking information. And also I am kind of curious who refused to give her more money when she called and who gladly did :)

minesomine September 18 2014, 21:10:34 UTC

Please, no dancing. No idol. Please, oh, please. LOL
I'm sure they must get sick and tired of all the dancing.

Yeahh, the entire lot needed therapy.
Top is one smart cookie.

Number 1. I hinted that Geun Suk had disappeared for a while in a previous chapter along with *goes up to look the name* Yong-hwa. Obviously they settled whatever still kept them apart. The guy never really broke any law, sorry he gets score-free on all the unfair pursuit on Yunho. And he didn't start being nice towards Yunho. I guess his only punishment will be having to agree to bottom all the time if he wants to keep dating.

Number 2! Well spotted! Thank you. *bows head in acknowledgement* Gonna take care of that right away. She does need punishment. Who refused to give more money was the news guy, no delivery, no money. Who agreed to give money was Siwon's creepy snake tattoo on neck guy *no patience to go look up the name* so that she would keep an eye when they sent the incriminating video to the Captain.
Damn, this story is a monster.

songbird52317 September 18 2014, 21:59:35 UTC

So pleased that Taemin bargained with Jae to get him into therapy. That kid is smart and very perceptive. Love that picture of Junsu and Yoochun. You don't see them that way much anymore.

I agree with not going the courtroom fic route. Since we already know what really happened, it probably wouldn't offer too much excitement unless there was a real chance that Siwon could get away. I could see some tense scenes happening during Jaejoong's and/or Yunho's testimony(ies) if Siwon starts getting mouthy or combative. Or steals a guard's gun and goes after one or both of them or Taemin.

I think it's hard to write after you've had a big climax in the story. That's part of the challenge I've had with my Intoxication story, but I feel like I'm finally making progress. I am so spoiled by your regular, almost daily updates. I don't know what I'm going to do when you finally finish this. Encourage you to start another I guess, but babies and life can sometimes get in the way of writing.

minesomine September 19 2014, 10:12:58 UTC

When I finally finish this I have a lot of other fics that are gathering dust.

Yes, the story is at half gas now. But I don't mind much. It's nice writing these same characters in a less frantic pace, where they actually have time to relax and develop.

Taemin's bargain was a nice way to twist JJ into agreeing to therapy. As for Yunho it was easy since cops have to do that from time to time, at least judging by all the cop shows on tv.

kattan69 September 18 2014, 23:57:23 UTC

All looks good for everyone....I'm happy for them. For Yunjae, a little time away and therapy would help a long way. But how are we going to make them come back together...unless there is another situation happening. Mmm.....

PS - I like Top and his wife little handy work on those disappearing or dead people. Too bad they can't do it on Siwon as well.

minesomine September 19 2014, 10:14:23 UTC

TOP and his wife will still have one final important task to do. :)

Next chapter, Yunho and JJ meet again. :)

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minesomine September 19 2014, 08:40:40 UTC

It's so easy to use Heechul to introduce some flair to a scene. ;)

minesomine September 19 2014, 10:16:36 UTC

Parting? These guys? Nah. They are all glued together.
Yes, JJ misses Yunho like crazy but he didn't feel ready to meet him yet. And Yunho misses him too. Oh, I'd hug them if I wasn't scared that they might turn jealous and angry at me.

Yoosu. It's so easy to get rainbows around them. :D I'm gonna make sure to include some more Yoosu just for you.