Bring me Junsu - The new slave - 5/5

Sep 15, 2014 09:53

Title: Bring me Junsu
Pairings: Yoosu, mentions of JaeMinHo
Rating: R
Genre: very inaccurate historical, like Joseon K-drama style
Lenght: I never know, sorry. Another small story arc.
Warnings: forced consent (read rape), humiliation, verbal abuse and violence, very mean nasty Yoochun, not fluffy at all
Summary: King Yoochun is furious with his ( Read more... )

historical, violence, yoosu, smut, fic: bring me junsu

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minesomine September 15 2014, 09:12:41 UTC
No, you are mine! :D


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minesomine September 15 2014, 09:43:07 UTC
Hey, the King has no idea how Jaejoong does it!
At least he bothered to try and not hurt Junsu too much.

The trick is in knowing how to have that written black in white in the law itself, there for the nobles to read it but vague enough that they don't notice it immediately. I didn't bother with much detail but that's the idea. And for that, you do need a good brain.

MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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kimyoosu September 15 2014, 11:18:31 UTC
Wow, very fast update.. Ofc bcs u have them written already..
Junsu didn't feel the pleasure.. Or not aware.. Like u said. I was hoping there we're kisses.. But this is fully fucking.. Sobs.

So there will be a sequel or epilogue? Omg. Can't the king fall in love with suie or anything..
The pain usually eased out by the kiss wasn't it? Hmm.

Anyway.. The queen hasn't got pregnant..
Duh~~

Thanks for this!!

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minesomine September 15 2014, 11:32:53 UTC
Yep, wrote this very fast. Finished all of it on Friday.

No, No pleasure for Junsu yet.
Kisses? Nah, not yet. Like I hinted at, this King is not very good in the bedroom department.
If the King will fall in love? It's very likely, after all, he's not willing to let go of Junsu.

A King must produce an heir, that is why he has a Queen. Which means, some nights Yoochun will still have to go do his duty in the hopes of an heir.

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awshin September 15 2014, 13:33:01 UTC
Yes, please have a sequel~ I'm curious how they'll turn out in the future. At least yoochun cares more for junsu than his queen. Though it may just be lust and will be over one day... but hey, he does care for junsu so maybe he'll fall in love one day. LOL. I know you're trying to write bad yoochun but hey, I'm just being romantic. XD

Oh, as for producing heir, he can place the woman beside junsu so when yoochun's about to have his orgasm with junsu, shift himself immediately to the poor waiting woman. Hahahaha!

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minesomine September 15 2014, 14:20:13 UTC
No! NO! NOOOOOOO!!!!
That is too much!

The King will finally get around to producing his heir but no, not that way.

It might become more than lust because the King is lonely and he does value Junsu's mind.

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awshin September 16 2014, 12:00:41 UTC
Wasn't expecting such a huge reaction from you! Hahahaha! Relax~ You're the author~

Hmm, I do hope that happens (that he falls in love with junsu). Yoochun can use some valuable soft skill lessons in his life. Hmm, looking forward to the sequel now. Hahaha! I enjoyed reading this btw. :)

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minesomine September 16 2014, 12:11:40 UTC
Thank you for enjoying the story. I really appreciate it.
The sequel will attack me one of these days.

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chihana11 September 15 2014, 14:11:37 UTC
Oh reading between the lines I'm worried for Changmin and Yunho. Jae seems almost as bad as the king. ALMOST lol.

Su is on the verge of Stockholm syndrome. Wonder what the next arc will bring. You are very good at describing bad sex btw.

Good job, it's an uncomfortable story but very interesting.

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minesomine September 15 2014, 14:18:11 UTC
Bad at describing bad sex, oh dear.
*falls off the chair laughing*

Cheryl, my darling, that is the best compliment ever. And the weirdest. OMG! You just brought tears to my eyes. Have I mentioned how much I love your sense of humour?

Changmin and Yunho are two and pretty strong, they can take care of themselves and Jaejoong, no problem. Jae isn't as bad as the King, he just has torture in his job description.
And I guess the King has ordering torture in his own job description.
Junsu, yes, he might go into Stockholm Syndrome while Yoochun goes into as love with someone as he can be with his twisty personality.

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chihana11 September 15 2014, 16:06:35 UTC
Oh no, I said you were good at describing it. The bad sex i mean. So the weird compliment is invalid. But I hope you take it as a compliment anyway.

I meant that you described what Su was thinking perfectly and it seemed so real. Not to humble brag but I've had similar experiences and this is exactly the kinda stuff you think. It's so different from the open happy way your thoughts and feelings dance and flow together during beautiful love making. No, during bad sex you are locked in your thoughts and try to detach from your body and just want it to be over.

Poor Su in this fic tho. Hugs him if he wants hugs and hides him from Bad King Chun.

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minesomine September 15 2014, 16:34:40 UTC
*confused* Reads own comment.
"Bad at describing bad sex, oh dear." Oh, dear indeed. I meant to write "good at" and ended up using bad twice. Damn, I need my beauty sleep.

Even with someone you like there are those days when you just think "are you done yet?".

The flip between Junsu POV and Yoochun POV was very effective to show how they saw the sex so differently.

*gives u a tight hug*

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hikari_guren September 15 2014, 16:33:49 UTC
I'm soooo in love with this fanfic! You did a wonderful job but I can't help but feel sad for Junsu. Love it anyways! <3

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minesomine September 15 2014, 16:39:27 UTC
Thank you, thank you so much.

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