Where were you all my life? 49/?

Sep 01, 2014 19:00

Chapter 49 - Aim! Fire!

Pairings: Yunjae, little hints of Yoosu
Warnings: mention rape and abuse, some violence, smut.
Summary:
Kim Jaejoong is forced to do business with the mafia who keep threatening him. Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun are responsible for his security. Jung Yunho is a cop investigating a paedophile/mafia man named Kim Jaejoong and ( Read more... )

violence, yoosu, minjunki, yunjae, smut, fic: where were you, action

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songbird52317 September 1 2014, 21:07:12 UTC
Oh no, Jun Ki! I'm hoping he'll only be hurt and not dead, and that all the good guys get away. Siwon must still think he has this under control which makes me nervous. Glad Captain Rain heard Taemin's description of events. I'm worried about Yoochun and Jonghyn. Heck, I'm worried about everyone. If Joon-gook's men shoot out the tires of the car, they could surround it and drag out Jae and Taemin or kill them all. I'll be on pins and needles until you update again.

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minesomine September 1 2014, 22:38:48 UTC
Jun Ki? Changmin will have to step up and become Charming, Prince Charming and rescue Jun Ki. He better do it cause I still want those two to kiss. That another kiss waiting to happen.

Siwon is all happy because he managed to find where Taemin was and now he still has changes to catch the boy. If he hadn't gone in full view, Taemin with his disguise would probably have been able to get away unnoticed. Grrrr, who made Siwon so smart? Oh, right... *hides*

Captain Rain needs to send in the cavalry. Our cop friends need to just barge in cleaning everything.

Yoochun... I'm counting on Junsu. Our sweet Junsu is a badass with guns. Whoever tries to hurt Yoochun better take care.

Jae, Tae and Yun... oh, those tires will be out for sure. For sure.

Honey, you better grab a cup of tea or hot choc cause I need to write next chapter. And you know I love my cliff hangers.

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chihana11 September 1 2014, 21:12:26 UTC
Spot! So excited to read this!

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minesomine September 1 2014, 22:39:17 UTC
This chapter has a big present for you! :D

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chihana11 September 2 2014, 01:07:36 UTC
As the only woman in this fic, well wait doesn't Ren have a mom?

As one of the only women in this fic; TOP, I will definitely pull your ears when he gets home and the children will eat all their soup.

Zomg, somehow I've turned into Carmela Soprano with kids and a mafioso husband.
At least TOP is better looking then Tony.

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minesomine September 2 2014, 05:57:00 UTC
Oh, much better looking.
But don't worry. You're not bland trophy wife. You'll find that out much later on. :D

One of three. There's Ren's mom, the mole / Oska's fling (no lines) and Top's wife. Just three women. OMG! LOL

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xiatian21 September 1 2014, 21:32:39 UTC
(Hello there! I'm a new reader, haha. ^^)
First things, first- I'm so glad that Ri Ho's club is getting taken down and by Top too! ;v; (The child prostitution was really getting to me like the angry feels I have at these people using them are too much--) Also things are finally cracking down and Taemin's saved! But I hope Jun Ki's okay and Changmin's able to get to him before it's too late! oAo

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minesomine September 1 2014, 22:44:27 UTC
New reader? :O
That means you read in one go nearly 50 chapters. :O
*jumps for joy* Oh, lord, I'm so happy that I managed to convince you to keep reading.

Yep, TOP is cleaning up house. He's gonna do a much more effective job than the police and leave quite the message behind him to any new bad guy who gets funny ideas.
As for our guys, they are not out of the woods yet. Not even close. I have way too many things planned for them.

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tardiskeeper September 1 2014, 21:45:53 UTC
TOP about time you cleaned up this mess happening in your own backyard. Cleaning out the house is the only way I see for this to be a clear warning lest anyone thinks it's a good idea to ever cross TOP.
Nerves are on ends, just what was Siwon's little stunt about and what happened to Junki? So much going on and such disarray. It's to be expected I guess considering so much was at stake, but they let their guard down and these are the consequences. Freaking Fudge how does Siwon get away with so much, but luck runs out and then, well then, oh I will wait until that moment and savor it.
Thank you!

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minesomine September 1 2014, 22:55:53 UTC
Top isn't just the weird guy with whom Jaejoong and Yunho had strange talks with.
He's top boss and he's fed up, pissed off, annoyed and any bad guy better run for his life. Not that Top will let them get away.
I doubt anyone will even consider crossing Top for a good few years.

Siwon needed to find out if Taemin was in the square or not. He trusted the boy's fear to give him away if he showed himself. And to also give away where Jae's men where. It worked. Taemin panicked when he saw him and that allowed Siwon to identify him. Yeahhh, I also don't know why I made him so smart. At least Taemin is smart too.

Jun Ki has Prince Changmin to save him. I hope. Or I'm withholding food from Min. Nothing can happen to Jun Ki. He's way too cute. And I want those two together already.

Disarray? Yes and I love it. It's been quite the challenge to write these recent scenes. I'm loving how you all seem to be enjoying it as well. That makes me really happy.

Siwon's luck will... oh, you'll see. I have it all planned. Just getting there.

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minesomine September 1 2014, 23:02:14 UTC
Kiss! Kiss! Kiss!

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minesomine September 2 2014, 13:16:03 UTC
Hi, baby. *squish u*
The Yoosu is coming but I need to get there. Let's put it this way: I already wrote them being all lovey-dovey but I haven't written what happens up to that. Blame me for writing out of order. Eh...

Yes, Junsu is gonna go off to the rescue of Yoochun. Bad guys won't know what hit them. ;)

Come on, they are all so good looking that it's a bit ridiculous, right?

Cheryl wanted Top, so she got him. You can't complain either, I gave you Su all to yourself in Connections, or better yet, I'm getting there. ;)

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