Connections - chapter 5

[minesomine]

Title: Connections
Pairings: Yoomin, Yunjae,
Warnings: Jaejoong and Junsu het, mpreg
Rating: Rated
Genre: Fantasy + Sci-fi
Summary: Somewhere in a possible distant future, there are colonies on distant planets. One of these planets has dragons and more amazingly, even men can birth children due to ancient genetic manipulation. But the strangest

Comments

[chihana11]

Spot!

OMG Yoochun masterbating!

[minesomine]

LOL!

[chihana11]

Is hard to imagine it, isn't it?
Imagine it just dangling around. Doing it's dick things? XD!
Pointing up sometimes?!

[chihana11]

I hear they get squashed easy if one isn't careful, and they get itchy, need to be adjusted, have minds of their own, point up at the wrong time. So yeah doing dick things.

[minesomine]

Balls get squished. That's normally what the guys are adjusting. The dick is better behaved and needs less tucking.

[chihana11]

I think its easy to sit on balls, XD.
Poor guys.

[minesomine]

Much more. They are dangling after all.

[chihana11]

Well unless you are Junsu on stage. Then they are positioned to the left and wrapped in up leather.
Yes I know I'm a horrible perv.

[minesomine]

A lot of guys go left. LOL.

[minesomine]

Oh, you two!

Let's see.... Nope. I think the most I can imagine was what I just wrote. Besides, too late for that. *laughs*

[minesomine]

*gives kisses

[chihana11]

Yeah not knowing such an essential basic thing about yourself for so long would be a drag.
I wonder why sexuality is so controlled in this world?
Well not sexuality but adolescence?
Makes me wonder...

I'm glad I made you laugh, honestly men and their dicks (which seem to have minds of their own) are baffling to me.

I love that you went into the mind of a guy.
Really went into it.
Sometimes the guys in stories seem almost interchangeable with girls.
This instead gives us a picture of how a man might feel and react.

[minesomine]

It was a side effect of the genetic manipulation based on the dragons. Then, you know people, they figured they could just suppress adolescence completely.

I know what you mean. I read tons of stories where JJ especially could be called Jane and you would only have to change "he" for "she". Even the sex wouldn't need much more besides removing the detail that Jane had a dick.
No need to change anything else about the story.
But hey, we are girls writing about men + men love, what do we know, right?

I guess we would need to get a guy to read this and give his opinion to see how close to a guy's mind it was.

[chihana11]

I found a guide to writing smut slash written by a man!
There are lots of tips etc...
And it's funny too.
He sporks the whole opening the bottoms um...errr...well...bottom up with one, then two, then three fingers, that happens in so many slash fics.