Where were you all my life? 33/?

Mar 09, 2014 01:57

Chapter 33 -  Clash of Tempers

Summary:
Kim Jaejoong is forced to do business with the mafia who keep threatening him. Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun are responsible for his security.
Jung Yunho is a cop investigating a paedophile/mafia man named Kim Jaejoong and the mafia is blackmailing him to do one job for them: kill Jaejoong.
And so their paths ( Read more... )

violence, yoosu, minjunki, yunjae, smut, fic: where were you, action

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noeldenever March 9 2014, 02:23:29 UTC
Arrgghhh, why did you stop there Mr.Jung?? Fight some more, YunJae!!! *dodges bricks
Ugh, really love that fight, I flailed over the hotness & intensity. They need to burn all their anger, remorse, and energy.
While I'm sure that sex marathon will help with their excess energy, it won't help them emotionally..
Hm, I'll let you decide whether they would talk or have some smutty time (or maybe both) ^^
Write whatever you like girl, I'd love anything from you...I'm so drowned in this fic I won't be able to resurface again OTL

Thank you for the awesome update, as usual <3

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minesomine March 9 2014, 03:01:55 UTC
Damn, even Mr. Jung lost his temper. LOL! I just noticed that. Silly me.
Everyone goes ballistic in this story.
Well, that fight was starting to turn into something else and come on, not in the middle of the gym with everybody watching... For those two anger = sex and all that angry fighting... *coughs*
Sex marathon? Talk? So hard to decide.

Thank you for the awesome comment. I'm sure we can get one of the guys to save you. Who do you want me to send your way?

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noeldenever March 9 2014, 05:03:16 UTC
Hahahah right, and I didn't even notice Mr.Jung was losing his cool xD
Uhm...ok, let them continue whatever the have to do behind closed doors. That will be interesting.
In normal condition I would have asked for Jae to save me but since he's sexually frustrated and as close to erupting as an active volcano...IDK. The only person that makes me feel safe here is Mr.Thumper LOL.

And btw, someone retweeted this pic into my TL yesterday, saying that the guy's name is Ren.
Is this our Ren here in this fic?


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minesomine March 9 2014, 08:57:28 UTC
"The mood between them remains relaxed and easy as they walk down the corridor to go to their rooms."
As in, Yunho goes to his room, Jae goes to his room. No naughty stuff. Although I have no idea if they slept or just tossed and turned in bed. The bodyguards were the ones making jokes about possible sex.
Mr. Thumper has a broken leg and a broken arm. If you are drowning in this fic, I advise u to choose one the younger guys.
Whe u described Jae as "sexually frustrated and as close to erupting as an active volcano", u just gave me a lot of feels. *fans self*

Ztarplay just posted this: http://ztarplay.livejournal.com/48005.html.
Have a look and cry.
*hands u a container of handkerchiefs*

Yes, that is Ren from Nuest. I love Nuest for their songs (you need to check Face and Action) but there is no getting around how pretty Ren looks.

How Ren looks in a regular video from Nuest:

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minesomine March 9 2014, 03:06:08 UTC
LOL. They were looking at each other really close, fast loud breathing, touching each other (ok, hitting and kicking but still), a few push and pull, I sit on you, you sit on me... Inevitable.
At least they calmed down a little.

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minesomine March 9 2014, 03:02:06 UTC
HUG!

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songbird52317 March 9 2014, 03:39:38 UTC
Oooo. That was good. So do Jae and Yunho end up in bed together? Or just a toss and turn night wishing they had gone to bed together? I can't imagine they'd be adult enough to actually talk to each other yet, but I'm always open to surprises. Thanks for updating so often!!!

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minesomine March 9 2014, 09:03:36 UTC
LOL.
"The mood between them remains relaxed and easy as they walk down the corridor to go to their rooms."
Nope, they each went into his own room, no sex. Toss and turn in bed? Oh, probably.

I have some more chapters ready or almost ready. I will soon maybe start a job. That will mean less time. But ain't no keeping me away from writing this. I am having way too much fun.

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miroticsoul March 9 2014, 05:56:02 UTC
Wait I'm almost falling asleep, but as a Brazilian i have to say, I never knew I wanted to see YunJae fighting Capoeira, but then you said and now I really want to XD

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minesomine March 9 2014, 09:05:30 UTC
Achei que ias gostar. Inclui a pensar em ti.
Thought you'd like that.

Capoeira looks awesome. Those two guys look awesome and can pull off a lot of physical activities, especially Yunho. I think they would look double, triple awesome doing capoeira together.

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miroticsoul March 10 2014, 21:29:02 UTC
It's not really a tradition here where I live in the South, but I think it's a beautiful dance/Martial Art *-*, I can only imagine they dressed all in white, dancing around one another, with fiery eyes *dead*

Thank you so much I reall love it =D

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minesomine March 10 2014, 22:10:55 UTC
It's usually used more as a dance than as a martial art. Nice for Yunjae, lol.

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paoktsou March 9 2014, 13:41:56 UTC
junki changmin just make out already ;)
hot yunjae fight cant wait to see if they gonna have sex
kyaaa thanks for updating love ^o^

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minesomine March 9 2014, 19:50:58 UTC
"The mood between them remains relaxed and easy as they walk down the corridor to go to their rooms."
Nope, their rooms, not Jae's room.

Jun Ki is holding out on poor Min, isn't he?

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