Where were you all my life? 28/?

Feb 25, 2014 03:23

Chapter 28 - More Changes

Summary:
Kim Jaejoong is forced to do business with the mafia who keep threatening him. Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun are responsible for his security.
Jung Yunho is a cop investigating a paedophile/mafia man named Kim Jaejoong and the mafia is blackmailing him to do one job for them: kill Jaejoong.
And so their paths ( Read more... )

violence, yoosu, minjunki, yunjae, smut, fic: where were you, action

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xzeffirx February 25 2014, 22:57:18 UTC
Looks like they still have a thing after thing damped on them to have a moment to feel and think clearly, but at least now they can go into the right direction

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minesomine February 25 2014, 23:52:39 UTC
They are going to start working together. Like Junsu said, it just keeps getting better.

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chihana11 February 26 2014, 03:32:08 UTC
Yay! You updated so fast! I'm glad your muse is smiling at you. I was really happy with this chapter.
I love Mr. Thumper/Jung !
Also great to see Yunho acting like a police detective and not like a traffic cop.
I'm really impressed with the guilt and sorrow scenes JJ has. I was so glad he recognized that he was wrong.

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minesomine February 26 2014, 09:56:50 UTC
My muse is bugging me with more ideas. I already have Jaejoong at the police station inside my head but no time to put it to paper. House chores and study time are yelling for me. Damn!
Plus I'm planning a sort of fanservice full of sweat but again, not time to write it yet. Ahhhhh! But I did check for pics to inspire me and I was drooling... Damn... *dreamy face*
Ok, have to be a responsible lady and take care of real life for a little so I can have more time to write later on.

Mr Thumper is going to shine more. Yunho, ah... Yunho, Yunho. Even Changmin is going to get open mouthed with Yunho. Prepare yourself. Yunho is going to surprise you.

Jaejoong is the one who will be in a roller coaster, maybe even more than Yunho. Yunho is dealing with things. Jaejoong is still sort of trying to hide them and not think about it, cause as you can see in the scene above, when he thinks about it, he compares himself to Siwon... Not good.

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chihana11 February 26 2014, 13:25:13 UTC
Real life, ah it's a bummer sometimes isn't it?
But take care of yourself, do what you need.
Real life Jaejoong sometimes seems very vulnerable to me, he also seems strong and is a survivor.
So your depiction of him was great in this chapter, I'm fine with more angst.
Ok I'm mostly fine, I don't want you to torture JJ for a long time. Gives puppy eyes to you

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minesomine February 26 2014, 13:34:17 UTC
Real life sucks sometimes. Doing a break for lunch before I return to ironing a truck load of clothes. Urgh!

JJ is too thin and his tweets are... I don't know if I want to kick him or hug him. Oh, the JJ in this story is a survivor and he will go over what u throw at him, even if he crumbles from time to time.
I am not going to torture him much. I don't want to take it to that point where I think there is no return. Personally, I think the situations I created are already pretty extreme but still somewhat believable.

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chihana11 February 26 2014, 15:24:55 UTC
Oh the worst was his most recent dripping wet shower tweet. He makes me want to dry him and wrap him up in a fluffy fluffy robe. And then feed him a good meal and desert.

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minesomine February 26 2014, 15:30:12 UTC
That's the one. He talks about 4 meals a day like it's this big achievement. Dude! Seriously?
Most people, if they can, will have breakfast, snack, lunch, snack, dinner and maybe snack again.
And he's less than 60kg when he's 1,80cm and on his way to becoming 30 years old? How?

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tardiskeeper February 27 2014, 00:50:40 UTC
Junsu is the balm and glue that keeps the sanity of the house. Junki can wrangle Changmin cuz clearly some one has a soft spot for said man. What would they do without these two, idk.
Good to see that Jae is confronting his demons because sooner than expected he will be facing the music. Whatever Siwon has orchestrated is so intricately woven that you have to really dig deep and tread through mud and blood to even begin to see his web of deceit.
Well now that they are on the same side and have one objective they are working like a well oiled machine, now Jae has to get his head together.
Thanks!

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minesomine February 27 2014, 10:51:32 UTC
Can I just bow at your feet? I loved your comment:
"Junsu is the balm and glue that keeps the sanity of the house. Junki can wrangle Changmin cuz clearly some one has a soft spot for said man. What would they do without these two, idk."
Loved it. *bows*

I got tired of secrets floating around. I like payoffs. So, BAM, revelations all around. And surprise, there may still be more secrets hiding around relating to the bad guys.

Jae will soon be back in functioning mode, minus his little problem of a certain cop under his roof that makes his body temperature rise. But I think we can live with that.

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kazemomo November 22 2014, 04:01:02 UTC
"Yunho stared at his father and at the enigmatic Assistant. He wanted to scream and hit his head on a wall. He had no idea what had just happened and what were these two talking about and was left with nothing to do but stare at them with a lost pout."
-Wow. Is yunho that clueless?

I think that pedo rapist got lured there. Maybe when yunho was chasing him down, he was heading there for something.

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minesomine November 22 2014, 11:37:50 UTC
Yunho has been too busy either getting punched by Changmin or having sex with Jaejoong. He just met Jun Ki. His father, however, has been free as a bird inside the house and getting to know everyone. Besides the man is very observant.
However, yes, Yunho has some clueless moments, lol.

The guy Yunho chased went into that building for a very specific reason. ;)

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kazemomo November 22 2014, 22:31:45 UTC
Your comment got me thinking that he was heading to that building to meet with the guy that shot him for a meeting and he remembered that there were hidden rooms so he might of tried to "magically" disappear while yunho was chasing him. Then it went to: could siwon have been the one to shoot that pedo rapist?? And that's the reason why he contacted yunho, so that in the end, he'll get rid of him? Saw an opportunity to put blame on someone else?

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minesomine November 23 2014, 11:01:39 UTC
The guy knew about the hidden rooms. :)
Siwon framed Yunho, yes, you guessed that right, but not that way. ;) It really was a matter of opportunity.

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