Chapter 28 - More Changes
Summary:
Kim Jaejoong is forced to do business with the mafia who keep threatening him. Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun are responsible for his security.
Jung Yunho is a cop investigating a paedophile/mafia man named Kim Jaejoong and the mafia is blackmailing him to do one job for them: kill Jaejoong.
And so their paths
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I love Mr. Thumper/Jung !
Also great to see Yunho acting like a police detective and not like a traffic cop.
I'm really impressed with the guilt and sorrow scenes JJ has. I was so glad he recognized that he was wrong.
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Plus I'm planning a sort of fanservice full of sweat but again, not time to write it yet. Ahhhhh! But I did check for pics to inspire me and I was drooling... Damn... *dreamy face*
Ok, have to be a responsible lady and take care of real life for a little so I can have more time to write later on.
Mr Thumper is going to shine more. Yunho, ah... Yunho, Yunho. Even Changmin is going to get open mouthed with Yunho. Prepare yourself. Yunho is going to surprise you.
Jaejoong is the one who will be in a roller coaster, maybe even more than Yunho. Yunho is dealing with things. Jaejoong is still sort of trying to hide them and not think about it, cause as you can see in the scene above, when he thinks about it, he compares himself to Siwon... Not good.
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But take care of yourself, do what you need.
Real life Jaejoong sometimes seems very vulnerable to me, he also seems strong and is a survivor.
So your depiction of him was great in this chapter, I'm fine with more angst.
Ok I'm mostly fine, I don't want you to torture JJ for a long time. Gives puppy eyes to you
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JJ is too thin and his tweets are... I don't know if I want to kick him or hug him. Oh, the JJ in this story is a survivor and he will go over what u throw at him, even if he crumbles from time to time.
I am not going to torture him much. I don't want to take it to that point where I think there is no return. Personally, I think the situations I created are already pretty extreme but still somewhat believable.
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Most people, if they can, will have breakfast, snack, lunch, snack, dinner and maybe snack again.
And he's less than 60kg when he's 1,80cm and on his way to becoming 30 years old? How?
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Good to see that Jae is confronting his demons because sooner than expected he will be facing the music. Whatever Siwon has orchestrated is so intricately woven that you have to really dig deep and tread through mud and blood to even begin to see his web of deceit.
Well now that they are on the same side and have one objective they are working like a well oiled machine, now Jae has to get his head together.
Thanks!
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"Junsu is the balm and glue that keeps the sanity of the house. Junki can wrangle Changmin cuz clearly some one has a soft spot for said man. What would they do without these two, idk."
Loved it. *bows*
I got tired of secrets floating around. I like payoffs. So, BAM, revelations all around. And surprise, there may still be more secrets hiding around relating to the bad guys.
Jae will soon be back in functioning mode, minus his little problem of a certain cop under his roof that makes his body temperature rise. But I think we can live with that.
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-Wow. Is yunho that clueless?
I think that pedo rapist got lured there. Maybe when yunho was chasing him down, he was heading there for something.
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However, yes, Yunho has some clueless moments, lol.
The guy Yunho chased went into that building for a very specific reason. ;)
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Siwon framed Yunho, yes, you guessed that right, but not that way. ;) It really was a matter of opportunity.
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