Where were you all my life? 27/?

Feb 24, 2014 02:36

Chapter 27 - Confrontations

Summary:
Kim Jaejoong is forced to do business with the mafia who keep threatening him. Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun are responsible for his security.
Jung Yunho is a cop investigating a paedophile/mafia man named Kim Jaejoong and the mafia is blackmailing him to do one job for them: kill Jaejoong.
And so their paths ( Read more... )

violence, yoosu, minjunki, yunjae, smut, fic: where were you, action

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noeldenever February 24 2014, 10:57:26 UTC
Guh? o_O *sharpen knives & cleavers
Come to me dear Siwon, I'll lovingly castrate you & hang your junk on my door >8)
What a godawful week you have, Jung.
Thank you for the update ^^

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minesomine February 24 2014, 11:11:37 UTC
LOL, depending on all of you, Siwon is going to have a slow painful death.

Oh, Yunho bad week is going into second bad week already. I'm hoping at some point it might get better.

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minesomine February 24 2014, 14:06:35 UTC
It's from some drama he was in. The crying pics were so pretty I had to include them. He looks fierce in this pic.

Ah, I had some extra fun playing with the HoMin pics. One with fire and the last one is sort of heart shaped.

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minesomine February 24 2014, 14:03:43 UTC
The video was hidden. I used to do that too. Hide files among the cluster of stuff that comes standard, where the programs are kept, and all those files that help the computer run. No one ever goes there.

Imagine Yunho arresting Jae the first night with that video in his computer, Jae would be in jail now.
Yunho had little time to investigate. Siwon called him Thursday and Friday he was blackmailed to hurt Jae.

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katie3863 February 24 2014, 16:53:53 UTC
Is it wrong of me that I am happy Jun Ki kicked Yunho?!

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minesomine February 24 2014, 17:04:24 UTC
LOL. And me thinking Yunho had been punched enough already.

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xzeffirx February 24 2014, 21:00:52 UTC
I prefer to save most of the kicks for Siwon! (even if Yunho deserved at list one now too, while Chagmin agrees with me on his level of thinking XD). But its hard not to pity him too. And Jae..they are both so broken now... so sad..
May be Yunho's dad can be a point for them to re-concile for a time being

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minesomine February 25 2014, 00:35:32 UTC
Kicks for Siwon, ok, I'll make sure to order those. But they may be some time in coming.

Jae and Yun will get better soon. I hope. It's been quite the stressful days.

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chihana11 February 25 2014, 02:17:08 UTC
Oh Yunho is being so honest here. I'm really impressed that he told everything, I though he would hold something back.
It was so sad that JJ was devastated by what happened to Ren. Poor JJ, he needs some cookies, or maybe to tweet another shower selca?

I was glad CM put everything together and I was really sad YH didn't. How did he advance from traffic cop?!

Thank you for two really great action filled chapters. I enjoyed both so much. The plot is great, I know you don't want to leave holes, I haven't noticed one.

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minesomine February 25 2014, 02:26:34 UTC
If we are going to do dirty laundry, let's do dirty laundry. Enough of secrets. And this will screw up the dynamics between Yunho and Jaejoong. Yunho was allowing himself to be some sort of willing sex slave, while I'm not really sure what was going on in Jae's head, except that he was always angry at Yunho or at the world and somehow that translated to having the hots for him.
Well, now what?

I had said that Min is smart, right? Yunho is too, maybe too much stress and one punch too many to the head? Let's see if Yunho improves. At least enough not to have Min wanting to kill him.

Jae has no cookies, still he gets Junsu. It will have to do for now.

Thank you tons for enjoying my story. I am trying my best not to leave plot holes. I'm always reading and re-reading to be sure.

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chihana11 February 25 2014, 02:41:21 UTC
The plot is so freaking perfect, it's like a detective novel! I like how we get enough plot in the chapters to think about, but it never drags, or make me confused.

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minesomine February 25 2014, 03:08:42 UTC
Would you believe me if I told you this wasn't really suppose to be a detective story?
Plus, I added and made up some things along the way...

All right, I'll admit. I just didn't felt like trying to write smut every two seconds, lol.

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