Where were you all my life? 26/?

Feb 23, 2014 18:24

Chapter 26 - Police Work

Summary:
Kim Jaejoong is forced to do business with the mafia who keep threatening him. Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun are responsible for his security.
Jung Yunho is a cop investigating a paedophile/mafia man named Kim Jaejoong and the mafia is blackmailing him to do one job for them: kill Jaejoong.
And so their paths ( Read more... )

violence, yoosu, minjunki, yunjae, smut, fic: where were you, action

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songbird52317 February 23 2014, 18:47:40 UTC
You teased me! Leading me on with an expected intense conversation between Jaejoong and Yunho, then instead get lots of worrisome police investigation. Seems like both Yunho and Jaejoong are being framed, but by whom? Same person or different? As always, I am enjoying this story immensely.

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minesomine February 23 2014, 18:49:57 UTC
I considered putting the cops part in the middle of Jae + Yun...
But the cops part is the entire day.
So, in the end, I left the cops full day in this chapter, and that way it won't get in the way of the following drama.

Jae + Yun will have an interesting morning.

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noeldenever February 23 2014, 18:50:52 UTC
I am...confused? LOL *dances DBSK's horizontal dance
So many missing puzzles, can't wait for them to be unraveled.
BTW, Jaejoong is even scarier than Changmin here, me likey hahahah xD
Thank u for the update ^^

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minesomine February 23 2014, 18:53:11 UTC
Well, I am going to start putting the puzzle together very very soon.

Jae is understandably upset and is going to get even more upset. Yunho better hide. If not from Jae, at least from Min.

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paoktsou February 23 2014, 19:55:39 UTC
confused with too many pretty boys...i'm in heaven OTL !!!
hehehe i like this even its no yunjae
keep going ^o^

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minesomine February 23 2014, 20:24:31 UTC
Oh, I have to tie my hands not to flood the fic with pics of the cast. Good looking cast, eh?
Next chapter it will really be their conversation instead of a teaser.

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xzeffirx February 24 2014, 00:13:48 UTC
Can I wack on the head everyone who thinks right away that Jaejoong is a bad guy? :)
And Siwon is just confirmed to be on the dark side..

PS. I don't know how to put pics in the comment, but this is what I think Yunho saw in the first chapter ;)
http://s1090.photobucket.com/user/Zefuroz/media/jaesleeps_zpsc93ccf87.gif.html?sort=3&o=6

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minesomine February 24 2014, 01:09:44 UTC
LOL, at least these cops are still trying to gather more evidence before they go in guns blazing after Jaejoong.
Siwon is confirmed? Really? How? Tell me, tell me, tell me. I wanna know what made you say that.

Sometimes, there is a square available in the comments after Bold and stuff, that if you slide the mouse on top it says "insert image", then you either upload or copy URL. When that isn't available, I don't know either.

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xzeffirx February 24 2014, 20:25:48 UTC
Thank you for explanation, I will try that!

As for Siwon, it was first that he said about not remembering Yunho and second - that he asked them what Jaejoong had to do with them talking about Taemin, while he specifically that to Yunho that its Jae who is a child molester and he can't help with more, then showing that video. One will think he would remember the only person he decided to trust (if he is honestly concerned).

PS. An this is Jae having THAT dream ;)


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minesomine February 25 2014, 00:41:31 UTC
Ohhhh, I'm impressed. I will have to be careful with you. I'm going to have to read what I write to make sure I am not leaving plot holes and stuff.
Yes, Siwon pretended to have nothing to do with anything. Quite convenient when he didn't mention having met Yunho more than once, eh? He's trying to frame Jaejoong again but he's taking a different approach this time. These cops are not pressured for time, let's see how they do.

I looooooove that gif. I think I am going to go back to the dream chapter and include that gif. And the other one on the first chapter. Too sexy to leave hidden in the comments.

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chihana11 February 25 2014, 02:06:04 UTC
Don't apologize, I love the stuff with the cops. I can see things shifting around and I'm wondering what is happening and who is honest and who is lying. It's really exciting! Plus as the situation changes, life will change for YH and JJ, maybe there is a bit of possibility for a future together?

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minesomine February 25 2014, 02:10:54 UTC
Possibility? Yes, I guess you can say that.

It was rather interesting trying to find ways to show some actual smart cops.
Still, my favourite was Ren's mom calling back the police station and asking to talk with Il Woo. Easy way to check his identity and quite a way to make sure the cop knows she's a smart lady and if she says Jae is good, maybe possibly she can be right?

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chihana11 February 25 2014, 02:19:10 UTC
Ren's mom, I love her. Good for her not to believe everything she is told.

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minesomine February 25 2014, 02:39:49 UTC
Yep. I was like, wait a minute, long distance call, someone says is a cop... No way.
Some friends and I have a routine of sometimes calling and saying smth like: this is the police, this is the tax office.
And I just had to have her check the cop identity.

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