The bet

[mindor]

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[monkeyonthelam]

"waiting for you to fuck me, like the rest of the world."

Perfect Ending! I like how you made showed both Zach and Chris's vulnerable sides in this fic. Hooray for toppy Chris! Always a favorite. Thanks for writing this hot hot fic.

[mindor]

Thanks for reading, and yeah, while Zach comes off as a total top most of the time, he tends to be the bitchy power bottom in my fics. :)

[takhallus]

Love love love the last line XD

And the rest of it for that matter - the part with the stripper was well hot.

[mindor]

Well Zach did say that and my Chris wouldn't be my Chris if he didn't make fun of it.
Thanks for reading! (and I was rather fond of Jake myself...)

[mindor]

Haha, no, it's all lies! Except for the fact that Chris'd totally have a seizure if he had to watch Zach make out with a stripper, tinhat knows.
Thanks for reading!

EPIC FEEDBACK OMGGGGG

[amerasu1013]

... *thud

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[amerasu1013]

Also I'm gonna rec the SHIT out of this!!!

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[mindor]

the way you described the other guy
Well, I tried to make Chris choose the twink, but he refused to be stupid about it...and I figured what the hell? Zach needs someone to intimidate him every once in a while...

AND THEN THE BET!
How could Zach not take offense at someone questioning his gaydar? :D

I want to go there too
Mee too BB, me too...

aww poor Zach...
What about poor Chris?! Zach just turned his perfectly vanilla straight life upside down! :P
And bossy!bottom!Zach seems to be turning out my thing, even though I still think he'd be a top most of the time.

And the last line was perfect!!!
I was desperately looking for something to end this fic with, and then Zach did that interview and I thought, if there's a single person on Earth who'd read a book after having almost!hate!sex with their best friend, it'd be these two.
Epic answer to an epic comment!
And I fail at quotes...

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[amerasu1013]

And I loved it all!!! Hnngh never stop writing fics bb!!! XD

[reelingstars]

“Reading Freedom and waiting for you to fuck me, like the rest of the world.”

OH CHRIS, SPOKEN LIKE A TRUE FANGIRL.

Honey, jfc, this was, yeah. Hot. Goddamn. Brain melting, panty sizzling hot.

[mindor]

Tinhat knows Chris totally makes fun of Zach's widely misunderstood humor (and interior design skills...)
Thanks for reading!