Well, I'm not too familiar with all of the Andante characters, so I can't help but feel a little disconnected from what you're writing. You don't seem to take much time to sit down and flesh things out, and as a result the story loses a lot of accessability, despite being not-too-hard to follow.
There's nothing really all that wrong with the story itself, though, assuming that every concept and person introduced so far is well-utilized, I'm interested in reading more!
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There's nothing really all that wrong with the story itself, though, assuming that every concept and person introduced so far is well-utilized, I'm interested in reading more!
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maybe with a hopeful ending?
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