part 2

[dane_mazurek]

PLOT!

Yes, there is plot, and there are more characters but as for now… fuckit I’ll describe them briefly here.  So, characters… the reason for the name is because of the sci-fi + fantasy mix I have proposed.  So, each character is given an element.  Zane = Chaos, Cory = Spirit, Ka Wa = Mind, and Angie = Space.  Within each of these elements

Comments

[bobangk]

That's a neat concept with the elements. :) I like how everyone's moving away from the typical Fire, wind,water,earth combo.>XD
Also, not a solid mecha, or the real villan, I'm all for it.>XD
I personally think it's really catching what's in between the 'grays' that really makes a story interesting, rather than being so clearly black and white.:)

and yes. I like your N too.>xD

[pepperidge]

The thing about doing a sentai story is that it's OK to use that as a basis for the story, but don't feel obligated to give equal focus to all of your characters from the get-go. It just drills the core of the story in through the reader's head, and that's really not a good idea. Let things develop naturally regardless of the "role call" the characters take on. It's OK to be gimmicky, but always following through on that doesn't really work well in literature.

Also, don't make it apparent from the beginning who the villain is. It's always more fun that way. XD